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Never again. by .Chaz

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From: inthendidon'tmatter

Date: 2005-02-01

Chapter: 1

OMG....MORE MORE MORE MORE I'M A DDICTED MOOOOORE. no way is that really happing omg are u serious...wow omg i can't stop saying omg lol... OMG!!

From: xXxFrGtNkEnJiDoLlxXx

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Date: 2004-09-14

Chapter: 1

wow. sad but i liked it!

From: Vampire Princess

Date: 2004-09-14

Chapter: 1

sad

From: .Chaz

Date: 2004-09-14

Chapter: 1

Thanks for the comments guys. Critisim and tips are much appreciated.

From: You Not Me

Date: 2004-09-14

Chapter: 1

~~And Mike wakes up a split second before the knife made contact with his skin.....~~


I like it as a standalone, very good descriptions, I could feel the way Chester felt. But I would love to see if you could continue this some how.

From: Twisted_Addictions

Date: 2004-09-14

Chapter: 1

Awww =( The only bad thing I found from it was that it was so short but it still managed to create a somewhat good whole to it. I don´t know but your descriptions of the dark living room and the atmosphere it created, seemed to pack more punch to Chester´s feelings.


Good job *thumbs up*

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