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Little Things Give You Away by DrummerLadyBourdon

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From: someone

Date: 2010-01-26

Chapter: 1

Okay for starters. I love no roads left. Have done for ages.

Secondly. THIS IS FUCKING AMAZING. Omgomgomg. I loveloveloveloveLOVE it...you need to write a second chapter!!!

From: xXloversxfadexX

Date: 2009-06-19

Chapter: ?

Mmm, vanilla fudgesicles unfortunately do not share the same taste as dick *sigh* Otherwise they'd be shaped like ones!


So that was sad and depressing with omghotbuttseckz at the end. *squee*s for Rob being nervous about proposing!

From: Moz

Email: juke_sprite@hotmail.com

Date: 2008-01-05

Chapter: ?

[It's DunkiesGirl from DA, btw :P]


My... God... *dies*


Some of those lines just made me 'lol'. XD


Honestly, one of the best M/C fics I've ever read. Dargh! *heart races* So hawt and steamy!


I am of massive awesome of love of you!! <333~

From: SteppinRazor

Date: 2007-12-06

Chapter: ?

Wow... that was REALLY steamy!

The part about Rob proposing to CJ made me giggle like a mad woman, and since I'm in a public place at the moment... it also caused people around me to inch away slightly... which made everything even funnier. it's so weird that people equate laughter with insanity. It's like you aren't allowed to be amused or happy if you're in public... but now I'm just rambling. sorry. GREAT fic!

From: kaitte

Email: qotdandbtvsrule@aol.com

Date: 2007-11-07

Chapter: ?

do you know where i can get a copy of no roads left? and this is an awesome story!

From: necrotech

Date: 2007-10-17

Chapter: ?

Hi <3 It's me. hehe Me lol Sesskagluvr from DA :D

From: Cheap Fantasy

Email:

Date: 2007-10-02

Chapter: ?

*dies in the best of ways possible, like from happiness* oh... my... god... =D wow.

vanilla fudgecicle? that is awsome XD pure awsome.

I loved it!! I can't come up with words. I was on the phone with my friend and i couldn't even talk! i already read it and i still was like "OH MY GOD XXDD"

*standing ovation...alone in my kitchen* 5 STARS! lol.

There's nothing better than bennoda =P except Bennoda + Rob.

From: Bennodaluver234

Date: 2007-09-18

Chapter: ?

im fucking sweating that was sooooo hot

From: EmBeR

Date: 2007-09-16

Chapter: ?

HA! In short that was awesome (like all your work). The slash was just, damn... That was just hot. Holy crap, I gotta download "Patience" now. Good job!

From: Master_Of_Darkness

Date: 2007-09-16

Chapter: ?

First off, I would like to say I'm sorry for not reviewing sooner... I wasn't quite sure what to say, and was a bit busy with the madness around the house... -_-


Secondly...... HOW DO YOU PEOPLE GET SO MANY FUCKING REVIEWS?... I guess you're all way better than me :P


overall, I absolutely loved the story... Love the details... I also like the fact it wasn't the same old same old M/C story... The details make it very unique... If someone before didn't like M/C, after reading this, they would have to. ;)


And last thing... I would like to say thank you for giving up your valuable time to talk to a loser like me... believe it or not, you've made me a million times less lonely...


Thanks :)


.... And keep up the good work. ^^

From: Hybrid Dragon

Date: 2007-09-16

Chapter: ?

[1) This is a belated birthday present to my “baby girl” Hybrid Dragon, whom I know as Kyotama. Happy birthday, Kyo and sorry this is a few days late.] Loooooooooooooove you! It doesn’t matter it’s late! I’m so happy! *does a little happy dance*

Mike: Some 15 year old….

Screw you Mike!



[“I’m ok Shinoda. I’m here at the Olive Garden…I’m going to ask CJ to marry me in a few minutes…”

…Holy shit.] You’re getting Married! Again! Can we have rum at the wedding this time? :D



[“She’s not worth getting mad over, dude.”] True true, I’ve seen much better looking girls in the world Mikey. Or Guys for that matter.



[I mean, I bet he could swing back and forth, but I only swung one way.] Like hell Mike. Everyone’s bisexual! We just have preference. And Chester’s perefrance is you so hop to it!


[Again, at least I thought I was…so why did what was happening feel right?] Quit thinking Mike! It’s not good for you! XDDDD



[“I knew you’d be my Mikey one day.”] Cheesy, but I love you for it.


[How did I never guess?] Cuz you’re an ass



[“Chaz…have you done this, with someone like me before?”

He pulled back, his dark amber jeweled eyes staring at me.

“No. I haven’t.”] *snorts* BULLSHIT! Riiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiight, whatever dude.



[And condensed milk goes rather well with coffee…] *dies*



[Would he taste like a vanilla fudgecicle?] *falls out of chair*



[my bittersweet flavor. (So I was told.)] You’ll learn…



[Every. Single. Drop.] Goddamn Chester……



[So this is what it’s like for a woman virginity to be broken…

Holy fuck…it’s a good thing it only needs to be broken once…] *shudders on the floor laughing*


[“…You…sure…you’ve…never done…this before?” I managed to string out in between my deep lungfuls of air.

He picked himself up off me, smiling warmly as he slide up to kiss my swollen lips. “Never done this before.”] Once again, BULLSHIT!!! *gets off floor*



*smiles* Fuck yes! I love being 15!! *dances and hugs ya* Thankies Big sis! I loooooooooove it :D

From: Converse

Date: 2007-09-16

Chapter: ?

[That was about two or three weeks after the New Year...maybe even around Bourdie's 28th birthday.] poor robbie... i’d throwq him a nice bday party and later on drag him off to his bedroom and make sweet love to him all night long XD *continues dreaming*


[But that was part of how "Valentine's Day" came to be.] sounds like a hearbreak indeed


[ ready to work on the 838,127,469th rewrite to "Bleed It Out"] honestly i doubt wheter it is true he re-wrote it that many times.


[his extensive body art easily on display.] that is sexy =P~~~~


[And it honestly scared the fuck out of me, because they could spill at any given moment.] chester sad is scary... cause he’s always so happy and joking around *huggles him*


[taking every last piece of Chaz’ pride and blood with her.] i have one word for her... bitch


[I went and got a fresh warm black cotton towel, peeling his we shirt effortless to blot at his cold clammy ghastly pallor, knowing he was too shocked, too numb, to want to do it on his own.] scene actually is pritty femilliar


[It made me wonder why he came to me, when Rob’s house was half the distance of mine, and his drum kit was even more inviting than anything I could’ve offered to de-stress.] a m/c and still you manage to make it about him lol XD


[And I wasn’t the only one who noticed.] *chuckles* a flash back would be nice

[“Hello?”/“Hey Shinoda.”/It was our loveable drummer./“Hi Bourdie. What’s up?”/Rob inhaled and exhaled deeply, sounding as if he was nervous…/ “Everything ok?” I asked listening to the voice in the background. He was definitely somewhere in public. “Where are you?”/Rob took another deep breath and I shifted uncomfortably./Fuck, he was making me nervous now./“I’m ok Shinoda. I’m here at the Olive Garden…I’m going to ask CJ to marry me in a few minutes…”] *squeels* cute cute cuteeeeeee Robbie :D he’s so adorible when he’s nervous


[“…Listen; I didn’t call just to tell you about my pending engagement…I called…because I wanted you to se something…check your cell.” He said, his nerves gone and his voice turned grave./Oh. Shit./I reached out next to the phone cradle and sure enough there was a new picture text message waiting for me. The picture quality really sucked, but there was something familiar about the main focus./“Can you see it alright?”/“’s kinda blurry…what…or who is it of?”/“You’re probably not going to believe me, but I’m telling you this because you’re one of my best friends…It’s Anna. And she’s with another guy, and she’s been pretty cozy with him for the past hour over here…”] Poor mike T___T he’s wonderfull and doesn’t deserve to be cheated on, anyone for that matter.


[“Good. I’d hate to be the one responsible for killing you…” I could feel Rob grinning on the end and that made me feel better. ] *Chuckles* he could only kill anyone with love and amazing drummingskills


[I mean, I bet he could swing back and forth, but I only swung one way.] come on mikey... i bet anyone could swing another way for chaz


[And while his lips were busy up there, his long thin hands slipped under my tee, fingering the soft hairs along my love trail, causing the pit of my stomach to squirm.] *fingers twitch* mike does have an amazing skin... would it taste just as good? *licks* it doessss!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! XD


[And I grew hard; from him, for him./Chester.] don’t be surprised mike

[He swallowed hard and I couldn’t help the satisfied smirk on my lips. My fingers clawed lightly down his soft chest until I graded his burning Desire.] *mad spitbubble*


[And condensed milk goes rather well with coffee…] i would like to try that maybe... after i’ve finished rob XD


[I could only stare back as he crawled up my body with the grace of a tabby. I could feel his swollen heat emit through his boxers and mine as I cradled his hard hips ] *breahtless*


[Would he taste like a vanilla fudgecicle?] *Licks* he does :D XD

[reducing me into a whimpering fool.] hmmm a whimpering mike =P~~~~~


[Every. Single. Drop.] *shudders and tingles* is it me or is it rather hot in here?


[“Fuck…so fucking tight…” he cursed, his head lolled back as his hips slid forward until he could not physically go any further.] *slight blush*


[So this is what it’s like for a woman virginity to be broken…/Holy fuck…it’s a good thing it only needs to be broken once…] this is a really nice one


[He picked himself up off me, smiling warmly as he slide up to kiss my swollen lips. “Never done this before.”] lmao... sure chaz... sure


[It was about the love I never knew I had for my best friend, which was there all along.] as all the fans would tell him... altough a lot start to think about a threesome with rob or just mike and rob lol


love it soooo much *huggles you* you are such and amazing writer i’m kinda jalous really *slight blush* i wish i had your talent... but this was wonderfull made me blush slightly tough... really hope one day that’ll lessen... whoa this is actually a long and random review... that’s been a long time *chuckles* i really loved the thing with anna and the red leather couch...


<3 wonderfull as ever sis...

lots of love <3 your ‘lil’ sis

From: Dylan

Date: 2007-09-16

Chapter: ?

Oh my.


God.


What a delicious fic you have written there. Damn, it was so beautiful, cute and lovely. Loved the food references. Maybe I'm crazy, but that was one of the things that made the fic indescribably hot. Lol.

I think I began to love Chester even more (if possible), due to this absolutely awesome fic you filled with that so sweet describing. And sweat. And Mike and Chester.


Great stuff. Meh, gotta have some lunch now. XD

From: linkinparkluvr224

Date: 2007-09-15

Chapter: ?

OMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMG.



I love you. And your writing. *another great orgasmic shudder*


:]]]]


I love the part when Chester says "I knew you'd be my Mike someday". <33333333333333333333333333333333333


damn right. lmao.


*HUGE HUG THE SIZE OF ROB BOURDON'S PENIS!!!*


Heh. I love you. <33333

From: KillingLights

Email:

Date: 2007-09-15

Chapter: ?

I like this story alot. It made me smile...


Will there be more?

From: Me (wee I'm not dead!!!)

Email:

Date: 2007-09-15

Chapter: ?

SO, beloved DLB... are you going to be the one that will make me go back to the beauty that is LPFiction? I can say, for sure, that is so nice to come back here after god knows how long from my LP retirement (which I spent gladfully in the world of MCR FanFiction woohoo!) and find YOU in the first page, with an amazing Bennoda waiting for me and reminding me why did I start writing in first place =D

O.o All that babbling meant: WHOA, AMAZING! lol


*mexican cookies for you*


OH, and I have the MtM dvd, and I just LOVE how Mike says ''oh, hi, Bourdie!!''... so cute ^_^ *eats Rob*

From: Vampire Princess

Date: 2007-09-15

Chapter: ?

omg ponies that was awesome! I love it it was funny and cute and smexy!!! : DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD *super glomps*


-VP

From: nodabear89

Email: nodabear89@yahoo.om

Date: 2007-09-15

Chapter: ?

[his long sleeved white tee clung to his vanilla marble chest,]


Oh god I just love your details. Friggin A if I just did not have a mental orgasm reading this!

-danni


*FAVORITED*

From: L~T

Date: 2007-09-15

Chapter: ?

BAH.

TIS MY REVIEW.

DO YOU THINK IF I WRITE IN ALL CAPS, IT WILL MAKE THE REVIEW LONGER? LOL.


Just kidding. I'll just put alot of spaces.















LOL



JuSt KiDdInG.

Anywhoo...

Kay...YAY M/C..Not my favorite pairing in the whole wide world but it's still fairly hot hehe. *does msn emoticon eyebrow wiggle*

Bahhhhh. Kay why don't I ever have anything to bloody well SAY??

Kay this was awesome. AWWWW YOU MENTIONED MOI?? *blushes and gushes* Teehee.

AAAAAAAAAND...awww they fucked. That's adorable lol.

The whole Rob...engagement...thing...+ the Anna thing...was kinda random and probably didn't need to be added but whatever moves your furniture I guess..

You coulda just had the M/C moments without involving the phone call. Just my opinion...doesn't matter much....lol.

Anywhoodlidoodlies...I have no clue how long this is so far but I promised you a long one so you will get a long one.


Fudgecicle....LOL.

Aw.

That made me laugh for some reason cuz I highly doubt any guy's dick would taste like that but...whatever floats your boat.

Also, the food references....were kinda weird to me. Licorice, expresso.........there are other ways to describe colours you know.


OMG.

I hope that didn't come off as mean. I just thought it was funny cuz everytime I read that, I thought of having something for lunch and then I really wanted licorice and then I REALLY wanted a fudgecicle.

Damn you.


LOL


Now L~T is hungry. Or...hongrie as my french friends call it. Even tho Hongrie means 'Hungary' in french but no one really cares.



See this is what happens when I try and make long reviews. They usually end up being REALLY pointless and completely retarded.


Anyways, I enjoyed this lol. Hopefully you could tell. I certainly couldn't based on what I've written.


WOOT <3 Mikayyyyyy and Chazzyyyy. :)

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