short ending i believe. i'm actually curious to know how things happened afterwards. it kind of leaves you hungry for more when you know there isn't going to be more.

good writing though. really like your style =)

Chaz is dead...Oh,no--[crying]

My heart is breaking...:'0

Love U and your story so much~~

You almost brought me to tears! I thought, 'Oh, there's another chapter, he must make it.' then you do this! *cries*

Excellent story. I look forward to reading more of your work.

*goes off, still sniffling, to cuddle Mikey*

Holy shit. I have just read this and I am nearly crying. Chaz is dead? Mike will never be the same again now the love of his life is gone. Damn you to hell Dave *Gets gun and jumps into the Impala from Supernatural and goes hunting* Can't wait to read some more from you babe x

aww no! Poor Chester! D:

.. god,poor chaz,what will happen? mike can help?

i love this chapter,continue please!!

that was hot. you always write the best shit

:)

Oh, it feels so sad..

Every time I see such a poor Chaz, my heart is breaking. It seems like there is no way out, no one helps him..

Well, Mike, can you be the one? why not...

OMG!Evil Dave and poor Chester!So FUCKING sad!

awww damn! Poor Chester! *sobs* Evil Dave!!! Is Chester dead? or...did Mike save him? sooo sad

Amazing job!

Poor Chaz,although Mike helped him,but he can't have safe still.

I Love this so much!=]

Awww i love this story

nice start

keep up the good work =]

i look forward to the next chapter =]

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