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In the Hands of the Law by Remy

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From: Babybear

Date: 2013-06-18

Chapter: 9

Well it's really up to you. I think that'd it'd be easier to just continue on with this story, but if you have a hatred for this story, then do what makes you happy. I'll read it either way :)

From: Hayley

Date: 2013-06-17

Chapter: 9

I think you should do option one :) I know cuz when my account was hacked I had to quarrel between having to rewrite everything, or just post the new chapters. And what helped me to make my decision was my writing technique. When I first started out I completely sucked (if you've read the first chapter of Linkin Lecture in my old account you'll agree with me) but then I started to forget about that and test how much my writing has actually improved my making that little oneshot story. And I was taken back by the feedback I got :) It wasn't a lot of reviews, but it warmed my heart to know that Blessed By A Guardian Angel was actually enough to keep people from taking their lives! It made them have hope and even though I didn't think I improved that much, I reread it and it was actually quite ok compared to my old writing :) So as I again thought about whether to start everything again with my new writing or not, I made the decision to rather start from where I left off. As and other readers and I are reading through my stories in the future I would be glad to see how much I've improved here as an author :) It helps me...So do the first one! I left a nice, long review for you ;) Haha! :P

From: Meg Louise

Date: 2013-06-17

Chapter: 9

This is amazing, do option one! I need to read more!

From: Maximum

Date: 2013-06-17

Chapter: 9

I would do option one... For some odd reason, I LOVE it when I'm reading, and an author noticeably improves.

From: Blackout

Date: 2013-06-17

Chapter: 9

I think I suggest the first choice. It must be exhausting for you too if you rewrite all of the chapters. Your writing skill will keep improving, so I guess it will be tiring if you have to look back on every story you've ever written and think, “Oh my god I was so bad,” then rewrite all of them. I feel the same, too, when I reread my old stories, and god, I was really embarrassed to read my old stories. But I'll be glad on any option you choose, as long as you continue this story :)

From: rhooben

Date: 2013-06-17

Chapter: 9

I've discovered this story just today. I've read it in a row.


Amazing idea, and story.


I understand your feeling about rewritting the story to improve the quality.


I would say is really up to you. The real question is would you like the story if you let the past chapter like this and improve the style for the upcoming ones ?


Whatever you will choose.. I'll stick around because this story is worth :)


Maybe you could not delete the story but re-write chapter by chapter ?

From: Vixenla

Date: 2013-06-17

Chapter: 9

Loved the story but do what's make you happy. We won't get mad.

From: Maximum

Date: 2013-02-21

Chapter: 8

Bloody hell!

Must... review. Must. Review.

MUST. KICK. FROST'S. ASS.

OAO Continue? Pleasepleasepleasepleaseplease? With some cake on top, maybe? ;u;

But anyhow, you must continue with this! This is so heartbreakingly tense and I must know how it ends!

From: TYshangshan

Date: 2013-02-15

Chapter: 8

fdasgsdfh happy this update!


such a amazing chap! just as usual XP! and made me wanna read more so much! :D love it!

From: Babybear

Date: 2013-02-14

Chapter: 8

Ohhh get flamin hot cheetos :D those are the best. Well, this is a very tricky case. Ray better pull out the big guns for this one. So if this kicks Frost's ass does that mean Mikey wins the case? ;D Update this sooon!!!!!!!!

From: JocelynJaded

Date: 2013-02-14

Chapter: 8

I actually don't like Oreos. And I only like Hot Cheetos..


Mike better win!!! For his sake, for Chester's sake...and for mine. Lol.

From: Ishiyama

Date: 2013-02-14

Chapter: 8

KICK FROSTS STUPID BUTT WITH A HAMMER! STOP - HAMMER TIME! *dances awkwardly out of the room*

From: MikesFangirl

Date: 2013-01-26

Chapter: 7

I love this story please write chapter 8 soon <3

From: Hayley

Date: 2013-01-26

Chapter: 7

YESSSSSSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

They're back together!!!!! XD YOU DO NOT KNOW HOW LONG I'VE BEEN WAITING FOR THIS UPDATE!!! This chapter was good (like all of them) entertaining, heart-warming and just down right AWESOME!!!! XD Do I sound like I'm sucking-up? Lol maybe. Hmmm Oreo's...I like 'em all! But I think my fav is the normal black ones :3 UPDATE SOON, GIRL!

From: JocelynJaded

Date: 2013-01-25

Chapter: 7

Yay!!! At least Mike is back...even if it's just temporarily. I would literally burst out crying if Mike gets the death penalty. Maybe it's just the fact that I'm a Fangirl, but I would be SOO sad. PLEEEASE don't do that, I don't think I can take it. So update soon, please!

PS thanks for The Joker! But I don't particularily like Oreos...although the yellow ones aren't SOO bad.

From: Babybear

Date: 2013-01-25

Chapter: 7

:D!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! BILLIE FUCKIN JOE ARMSTRONG ;D. I loooooooooooooooove him, almost as much as Mikey!!!!! Okay...that made my day. Anyways...wow I'm surprised they actually let him go on house arrest for murder. He got lucky. Haha he socked him in the face xD!!! He deserved it for not using his brain!!!!! Let's just hope he doesn't get capital punishment. I doubt he will, but you never know, right? It'll take a miracle to set Mike free. Okay, well for my oreo, I want a Mike flavored one. If they're out of those, I want a Billie Joe Armstrong flavored one. If those are all out, I want a Chris Pine flavored one. If those are out I want a Logan Lerman flavored one. And if those ones are out, get me an iron man one. Haha okay good job and update soooooon!!!!!!!!

From: TYshangshan

Date: 2013-01-25

Chapter: 7

ohhhh >< i just feel like im watching a serial from CBS or some other LOL~ love this chap so much~

and i love the last part especially, mike did all those things, even killed a man, just for chazs safe, for his innocent and peaceful sleep, thats totally worth to mike...awwww >.< thats warm.


amazing chap! LOVE IT SOOOOO MUCH!! :D

From: Lord_JaJa

Date: 2012-12-27

Chapter: 6

so this will be a short review.. I should work on amnesia but you know, I'm busy lol. uhmmmm ok so I don't know what to say. they found chester which is good. the guy isn't even sick which is good. the guy who got the "publicity" is a jerk and yay for mike for having plotted this for.. eternity lol or so it must have felt like. the kill was swift and kinda weird but then again it's nice to leave gaps for the readers to figure things out by themselves. what else. hope he's going to jail >:D

From: JocelynJaded

Date: 2012-12-21

Chapter: 6

Oh, and The Joker please! I love the Joker

From: JocelynJaded

Date: 2012-12-21

Chapter: 6

WHOA. I find this slightly funny, and VERY surprising. Wtf, Mike! Now he's gonna go to jail...and how the heck did he do that so ACCURATELY??? He must have been practicing! But on who?

What's gonna happen next? I'm scared for Mike!

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