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Roads Untraveled by MissBikeFinoda

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From: hit_n_run_me

Date: 2020-12-19

Chapter: 27

Okay I’m going to try and not make my review too long, I’ve been reading this solidly for weeks and every chapter felt I wanted to review as this story has really tugged at my heart, but I waited as thought leaving 26 reviews might be a bit overkill.


Mostly, just wow. I can’t believe this story passed me by when you first started it. I dip in and out of lpfiction but somehow keep coming back, and I’m very glad I did for this one. It really reminds me of a few amazing stories I read on here when I first joined around 2004/05, and this story really reminded me how much I loved those times of LP and the buzzing place this use to be coming on here. But, it’s still here and so are you which is amazing.


I think you did such a good job of turning their close friendship into more, the speed you did it at just worked so well. It did have me gritting my teeth at times and trying not to skip ahead, but I can only take that as a good thing as its been bloody gripping! Honestly, I would be reading it at 1am and then 12 hours later be reading it on my little phone screen on my lunch break at work just to get more of it. The pace has worked well and I love how close they are in this last chapter.


Talinda in this fic is just awe inspiring, so selfless and sweet at trying to get him together with Mike even though she was still very much in love with him. I really like how strong and resilient you made her character. I feel for her, but also for Anna too. Even though her character is less tolerable I do feel so sad for her as she never fell out of love with Mike but seeing him fall for somebody else and not even be aware of it is pretty crushing! But poor Otis! I just kept thinking about the attachment issues he has and might have more of.


I am very (very) nervous for the next chapter to come, just feeling like they might be exposed to Anna soon with the more people that know. Very much looking forward to reading it though.


This story came up at the time when I’ve been really needing to escape into a different world, and kind of like you said in your authors note - one where Chester is here and happy. You’ve really brought that to life here and thank you for that. To be honest, I’ve been trying to write fics for years and never quite finish them or there never good enough to me, and reading this was like yep this is how I want to write. Just how you manage to slowly progress the story with different characters and then still keep Mike and Chester’s closeness present and to the forefront of the story is inspiring.


I hope you are keeping okay in yourself and that the writing is helping you too in some way. I know we don’t know each other but if you ever need to reach out I’m here; LP family always <3


Have a good Christmas, stay safe.


-Lisa

From: angelic

Date: 2020-12-01

Chapter: 27

I am.. . wow... I didn't know I needed this but damn I really did! So much love and smiles and laughter.. . so much happiness for our boys... I honestly loved every single word of this! I admit I always do since day one but this is just what I needed after this fucked up year, so thank you for this!


I really hope you have or find some kind of life ring to help you stay afloat, keeping your head above the water, not letting you drown again... Also feel hugged tightly by me, sending lots of love and strength your way!


Love,

angelic

From: Fable_star

Date: 2020-11-04

Chapter: 27

So exciting to see an update on this story!!! This is one of the first stories I read when I first started reading here and it made such an impression on me!!

I just re read the WHOLE thing and i still love it as much if not more!! The time and love youve given it, building up the relationship and characters slowly and with so many layers makes it such a great read!!

Ive been enjoying the last couple of chapters and feel nervous that something bad could be coming up...brrrrrr

They deserve their happy ending....I can't wait for when you update next.. I'm being selfish and hoping it's very soon

From: Esmeralda

Date: 2020-11-02

Chapter: 27

Welcome back! I LOVED this chapter so much... it doesn't matter how long you take to update as long as you update!!! Now I'm dreading your next chapter too. Please have them have their happy ending. I hope you stay safe and healthy!

From: melano

Date: 2020-10-27

Chapter: 27

welcome back <3

From: angelic

Date: 2019-06-25

Chapter: 26

My dear MissBikeFinoda!


I know, I know, I am a *cough* bit *cough* late this time. To be honest, I haven't been on here for quite a while and then two days ago, the thought to come on here to take a look came out of nowhere and what can I say? I was totally hype that there was a new chapter for me to sink my teeth into.


Anyways, with the second anniversary of Chester's passing so close, it was kinda hard to read through the tears, but as always I fucking loved every word of it!


I love that Anna finally seems to slowly come around, I love the little Brad/Elisa in there, I obvs love Mike and Chester, I love Ches with the kids, I love how protective Draven is of Talinda, I love the Chester/Erika dynamics, I love the Talinda/Rob/Erika relationship... Ok, I just effing love Erika, full stop!


And let me tell you something: The moment you finish this (whenever that may be, no hurry, because I'm following this amazing story for 7 years now (my god, where has the time gone?! O.o) and I plan to stick around for another 7 if you need them to finish)... anyways... what was I saying? Ah yes... whenever you finish this, I plan to print it out and have it bound, so that I can keep it next to my bed to read over and over again (if that's alright with you?), because throughout the years and over various fandoms, this is still in the top 3 of my all time faves.


So, be sure... whenever you are ready to write/post the next chapter, I'll be there to read it!


*hugs you tight*


Love,

angelic

From: angleLP

Date: 2018-12-22

Chapter: 26

Let me be honest, this story was the sole reason that I wanted to make an account here. I’ve been trying for months and when I finally got a way to join the first thing I did was to comment here. Needless to say I’m so happy to see that you updated this story. It’s one of my absolute favourite story and I would love to see you complete it. Please take your time but don’t leave it.

From: lpfan503

Date: 2018-11-25

Chapter: 26

It's good to see your update. :) The last year has been hard, and we're all here looking for something specific to help us deal with things. Don't worry about taking your time.


I did have to read this twice, and go back and look at previous chapters to connect some stuff. Don't be afraid to update smaller chapters as you get stuff ready. It was a little hard for me to keep up with the scene changes in this particular chapter. BUT - you packed a lot in here. I appreciate your story line and I am so, so curious to see how things eventually play out with Anna. That's been what keeps me looking for this story. I have to know what happens there, so trust me, I will look for this update forever until you finish it. *hugs* good luck, I believe in you!

From: Esmeralda

Date: 2018-11-23

Chapter: 26

I am so happy to see you posted a new chapter. I've always loved this fic and I've been reading for a long time already. But I knew a new chapter was coming at some point since you usually take a long time to update. I'm glad you mention you will be finishing this, believe me something this good cannot be abandoned unfinished.


Well, that scene when they finally had sex and Chester's mind began wandering and thinking of him and Mike finally reminded him it was him. You have a beautiful way to show this kind of emotions. I'm glad Chester was able to tell Talinda, is amazing how she can be so caring and still be his best friend even when they are no longer together as a couple.


Omg and that final scene when the kids got them, that was a complete shock, so hilarious, I'm so happy they laugh it off and I know at that moment Mike decided he doesn't want to be anywhere else but with Chester. So so beautiful. Thank you for this.

From: angleLP

Date: 2018-10-16

Chapter: 25

I ABSOLUTELY LOVE THIS STORY.

I'm in love with all the characters you've created. All the band members along with their family were described amazingly. And the kids were so adorable <3. You really have a way to make the readers connect with the story you are telling. I was sucked into the universe of this story. This whole ride was a roller coaster of emotions for me. It made me cry, smile, laugh, sad but most of all filled my heart with love. The scenes with Mike and Otis were really heart wrenching. Mike is such a sweetheart and wonderful with both his kids. The way you've shown Talinda as really selfless and understanding made me respect her so much. Felt a little bad for Chester coz he was so confused and nobody was telling him anything. My heart aches for him as he's always wanted a daughter and now that he's got two but the circumstances are different now. But i'm sure Mike, Chester and Talinda will figure it out as a family.

I am excited to know what happens next for them. Hope you'll continue this story.

From: beezeecade

Date: 2018-04-05

Chapter: 25

GUUHHH YES ME, I’M STILL HERE, YOUR WRITING IS AMAZING.


I love this story to bits but it hurts my heart so much whenever something doesn’t go their way. It’s so so realistic and that somehow makes it better but more painful. I really love how things are looking up for them slightly, but... Anna... I’m so nervous about what she’ll do because she did ask Mike not bring Otis around any new partners... *sigh* She’s so nasty in this fic, I both hate and love you for it. But your characterizations are on point. I love the band’s friendship, love all their personalities (except Anna’s rip), love that it’s so... embracing of different perspectives and viewpoints?


AND THAT ACE REP, HELL YES ERIKA I LOVE HER.


I can’t wait for a new chapter and I’m giving you so much hugs and love. Hope you carry on this fic through to the end. :’) ❤️

From: ALifeForMusic

Date: 2017-10-16

Chapter: 25

I just read the last chapter and I love this story so much! I'm so excited to see where it goes, hope you update soon :)

From: ALifeForMusic

Date: 2017-10-16

Chapter: 25

I just read the last chapter and I love this story so much! I'm so excited to see where it goes, hope you update soon :)

From: lpfan503

Date: 2017-10-14

Chapter: 25

I'm late to the review party, but I needed to let you know how much I adore this fic and look forward to the next update. Everything between Mike and Chester is so touching, and I love how you weave their songwriting into your story. This is a masterpiece.

From: JessLP

Date: 2017-10-03

Chapter: 25

I absolutely love this story!

Eeeehhh

The kids are so cute in this fiction!

I love Mike and Chester's steady relationship :)

And the slash was a nice little surprise for me!

Thank you!

From: ALifeForMusic

Date: 2017-10-03

Chapter: 25

I've read the first six chapters now, and I love love love this story! It's well written and has everything I like - drama, realistic Bennoda and cute babies! So excited to read the next chapters!

From: ALifeForMusic

Date: 2017-10-03

Chapter: 25

I just started reading this story and am so excited to see where it goes! Please keep updating!

From: becisamonsta

Date: 2017-09-28

Chapter: 25

MissBike! Hello!!......

I was told a week or so ago from a good friend about this site (I know right....talk about living under a rock.....) and thought I would give it ago seeing as thought Chester's death has really shaken me up.....he told me that this site is good to escape the pain and get lost in the fantasy that these stories bring!


I'm sorry for my word vomit....just when I began reading I read yours and domho's stories first and I must say...wow! This is so well written! You have a brilliant way of discribing everything that is happening almost as if it is real, it helps me step into a reality word which is obviously the fiction world.


Damn...they were so hot for each other to begin with and I love that this story their feelings for each other blossomed magnificently over time. haha! And that first kiss...damn...


The slash in this is so good I almost had to wipe the spit from my chin lmao because the way you discribed it was amazing and well detailed!!


Their kids are so cute in their fics too and the band members! So well written for each character, you've really established them with their own personalities....


Thank you for the update too :) favourited!

From: derekbrad

Date: 2017-09-26

Chapter: 25

I love this! Love love love! The slash scenes are amazing! Such a beautiful story :) thank you for this <3

From: Ritz

Date: 2017-09-23

Chapter: 25

Hi! Finally, after few weeks I was able to find the right person to help me register here in LP Fiction. Because I really wanted to let you know how much I appreciate your works. I actually send you some tweets to let you know I am reading your story, but I guess you haven't seen them yet. I am also a fanfic writer but in another fandom (Backstreet Boys) and I hate slash fic because I can't imagine my boys getting it on each other but with Mike and Chaz, I don't know, there's something about them, about their chemistry that makes it so believable that they are indeed in love with each other.


This is not really a review for this specific chapter but a thank you message. When Chester left us 2 months ago, I was really heartbroken. I needed to be in a world where Chester is still alive (f*ck, that hurts to say). So, I googled if there was any Fan Fiction site for LP. And, really lucky I found LP Fiction. And your story. I get lost in your story and somehow, everything is fine. This helps the pain go away for a while. This is one of the best Bennoda fics and currently my favorite. I have read this a few times, and shared with fellow Filipino LP fans. One of my friends have been rereading the story again while we wait for new update. And your story is always one of our topics when we chat. We love how your story is not just about hot bennoda encounters, but you showed emotions that are so real.


So, Thank you. Thank you for writing. Thank you for sharing your talent with us. Thank you for updating.


When I have the time, I will try to leave a review per chapter. :)

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