I really enjoy your story. It's very intriguing. I love the plot and characters and your writing style. Keep up the good work!

Wow!! It took me nearly a week to read this whole story.... Only having discovered it and already you have 18 chapters!!! Ugh, I'm so bummed it tookme forever to notice this! This is so fantastic! Your attention to detail is exquisite! You have taken so much time to really perfect the writing and to lay this story out at a realistic pace. Often times so many stories are rushed (I've been guilty of that!) - but this has such a true timeline. Of course it would take both men time to process their feelings and divorces don't happen overnight and you don't stop loving people overnight. This is beyond what I thought it would be and oh so fantastic! Can I gush enough about this?!? It had me on the edge of my seat! Immersed for days!!

I love each character - I cant even start! The children are all so precious - they are so well written too. I have to say Otis is my favorite - he's way too sweet and my heart breaks for him. Draven as well - these two so, so affected despite their differences in age. I do love Rob's story as well and I get giddy with him and Erika :) :) oh Robby!! Mike and Chester - they need no words. Powerful relationship between the two and you portray it so well!

Can't wait for your next update!! Xoxo

Uh hell no Tailinda was pregnant...I love your writing. It's awesome. but...the plot made me feel stomach twist to think about the fact. I felt so bad for her.

*dies*

oh my... how could you leave it there?! *dies again*

Jesus, Chaz is soooo cute in this... A few weeks back, he didn't even know that he is attracted to Mike and now he is more than eager to follow that path straight through... that's exactly how I imagin Chester to be... straight foreward and fuck everthing the others might say...

Did I already tell you, that I love how fucking real this thing seems at times? Chesters eagerness, Mike's hesitation in going too far and I even like Talinda in the way she is... *sighs*

And I still don't get, HOW THE FUCK COULD YOU LEAVE OFF THERE?! *dies again*

God, I want to know if Chester got finally through and what Mike'll do, and how Talinda will fucking tell Chaz that she's pregnant and if Anna finally gets some sense and... oh man... just please please please update as fast as you can, cause you really got me addicted here! *feels already symptoms of withdrawal*

*feeds you cookies to bribe you to write faster*

*grins*

angelic

AGAGHAHAKJKKLLLLLLKKJNMMMMNVC NO WORDS I HAVE NO WORDS OH MY GOD NONE JSKAOAYSUIAKALALALALLPP I love you and I love this story and thank god you write long chapters because I am fucking addicted to this thank you for being my supplier

Omg yes!!!! I freaking loved your new chapter it was amazing!!!! They way Mike is letting his feeling for Chester show is simply great!! But I still feel he is heasitant to go further since he questions himself about how far are they willing to go. Chester I feel wants the realness of the relationship. He need to feel Mike not fight himself and just let go so that he could feel Mike truly want him. Hayley is just adorable! Words can't describe how cute she is and how she makes they guys' lives during the tour a bit difficult but at the same time it brings variety and that is great. The teasing at Adam and including all the other LPU people was awesome and it made it feel so real! Even when Adam teased Chester about having too many kids and that Mike's were included. The other guys are getting a bit suspicious, at least Joe since he was like "I can take a hint" when Mike and Chester were in the hotel room alone. The Talinda thing was kinda surprising since Erika had not been exposed to that kind of things. I'm glad that she and Talinda are bonding and that Talinda isn't alone and has her and Rob. Overall amazing chapter!! The ending was amazing!! To see Mike kiss Chester like that was amazing and I can't wait for more! Update soon please!! And don't doubt your writing because it is flawless.

You do not have to worry. It was fucking amazing. Oh my god I love you and this story. It's taken them an agonizingly long time to get to where they are and they've still been so hesitant and it's torturous in a good way. Poor Mike doesn't know what to do since being with Chester could jeopardize his custody of Otis. But they both really do want it. And taking Hayley on tour is making things harder for all the guys, but she's so cute. I love Chester's energy, it's so him. I loved the chapter, every part of it and I'm dying to read the next.

I read the story for a long time!!

Damn that sucks (not the story!)

What happened?! You can't leave me hanging like this TnT

OMG It's finally happening! This has been building up for a long time and I can't wait to see what happens.

HOW DARE YOU LEAVE US BREATHLESS LIKE THAT >_<

No way it's getting great

Oh my damn God! You really know the definition of descriptions that make me feel breathless... This last chapter was too much for me! A lot of feelings that I could feel by myself just for read... Congratulations for your literacy! It makes me read the whole story again and again!

And I can't believe that they kissed for the first (real) time! This is so exciting and loving and all... I want all them problems go away so they could be together, but not just for one night... (I wish A LOT this night will exist!) If Anna left Mike because of Chester, doesn't make any sense if he couldn't stay with him as a boyfriend.

Wonderful point!

I'll be waiting for the next chapter! Xxx

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!

I fucking knew this would happen! Goddamnit Anna, I really just want to strangle you!

... I think I'm calm now.

This chapter was awesome, really loved how everyone reacted but still let the two singers figure stuff out on their own.

Dave. I need more Dave in this. He gives me life, with his exercising and sincerity and sass.

A crawling baby on tour is going to be the funniest thing, and I give you mad props for being brave enough to write that (and her character as a whole) because it's gotta be so frustrating sometimes! But at the same time, I know no one but you would be able to execute it so flawlessly.

I hope Mike will be able to see that he can love Chester, and have Chester love him back, but still be able to keep Anna in the dark long enough to have the divorce go through. REGUARDLESS OF THE DELUSION ANNA HAS OF EVER GETTING MIKE BACK.

EVER.

...lost my shit again. Sorry.

But in all seriousness, amazing chapter. What I said before still stands true, everyone is in perfect character. When this story is over with (crying just thinking about that, by the way), I think I'm going to have a really hard time separating this from reality xD

-Jack

OH MY FUCKING GOD OF ALL! *gets heart attack*

This chapter was so... oh god I can't even find the right words to describe what's going on in my head right now... and somehow I can easily understand how Mike must be feeling now *lol*

And really... how could Chester stand to not say anything for that long?! And than he says something and ... that last scene blew me away... I plays in my head again and again and I am honestly torn between "FINALLY!" and "FUCK, what should they do now?!"

Oh and please, please, PLEASE!!!!

Don't keep us waiting so long for the next chap because I am DYING to know Mike's reaction and Chester's reaction and oh hell... how EVERYTHING is going to work - well I hope it will all work out!

Jesus I am so shaken up, I really don't know if I can sleep now (it's after 1 a.m. over here)...

So please update soon, so I can feed my addiction (yes, you got me addicted *lol*)

*hugs you tight* thanks for this unbelievinly well written story!

angelic

Them feels!!!! He told him everything Talinda had said to him about Mike's feelings! This chapter was by far the most eye opening chapter of your story and I loved every single bit of it. What can I say the emotions between Chester and Mike were very real because they both are confused about taking the next step or not. Little Hayley is now crawling!! Omg that was so cute and definitely terrifying for the vocalists but immensely cute. The Phoenix workout challenge was funny and I like that you include other characters so the story doesn't just feel like it is Chester and Mike exclusive. Rob finally getting some action in a story with a love interest. For some reason I thought that feeling would develop between him and Talinda, but I'm glad it's worh Erika instead because the drama would never end. The end with that unexpected kiss, I was left speechless. I felt bad for Chester because I know he feels something for Mike but doesn't want to be the only one to admit it and Mike rejects him because of the Otis situation. I honestly hope that they can find a way around that and be genuinely happy. Your story is amazing and I cannot wait for the next chapter. You definitely have an amazing talent for writing. Amazing job!

Oh. My. God. You write so god damn perfectly I don't even know how to deal with it. I feel so many freaking emotions when I read your story and it is intense. The arguments and things between Mike and Chester feel so real it's incredible. I fucking love this story so much. I'm dying to know what happens next.

Omg!!!! He finally got it all figured out!! I can't wait for the. Exit chapter. The Tyler thing was messed up and I wish Chester would not get hurt but he has feeling for Mike that he can't deny also and hopefully now he will be able to see it and be truly happy.

Oh my god I am in love with you. I just binge read this all. I need more. Holy crap. Your writing is so great, and your story is so intense and good. I love it so much and I can't wait for more.

I am so excited for what happens next!

The build up was set perfectly throughout the entire story and the way Chester realized what was going on was so in character it's ridiculous. The best cliffhanger. Amazing.

As always, I love how you switch from character to character and have all of their stories intertwine. The way Rob has been there for Talinda is really awesome because she is going through a lot and I think without him she would have lost it a few times. I really hate that Tyler was sent with Sam, but at the same time I know it was necessary.

Chester and Mike are both going through a lot of crap, and I really can't wait for them to just sit back and look at each other and for a split second feel completely content. That little bit about how Chester can't sleep without Mike anymore- the feels. Wow. The way they interact with each other and the baby is literally my favorite thing. EVER.

Can't wait for the next chapter.

-Jack

OMGGGGGGGGG *FANGIRL SQUEALS* AHHHH YOU UPDATED MY LIFE IS COMPLETE. I love this story so freaking much. The first time i read it was sooooo long ago, and eventually I had to accept that this would never be finished, but not so!! I love the way you've built up Chester and Mike's relationship. Theres so much love between them! It's obvious they have deep feelings for each other, even if they don't really know it yet. And oh my god! I just want go hug everyone. Otis breaks my heart <3 I hope Mike gets full custody of him. Maybe once all the divorces are done, Mike and Ches can really begin to develop their feelings. Please update soon, for the sake of my sanity!

I can't wait for the next chapter!