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Roads Untraveled by MissBikeFinoda

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From: Wake0916

Date: 2013-08-09

Chapter: 3

Omg!!! You finally updated!!! Ok first I woul like to say that I lie this story. It's amazing!!! It feels so real and the characters are simply amazing. You have such a way with words that I am left speechless!! I added to my favorites cause this story is amazing!! Please update soon.

From: Meg Louise

Date: 2013-08-09

Chapter: 3

Omg this chapter was perfect! I'm waiting for when Mike and Chester FINALLY fess up their love for each other. I love this story and how you write:), Update soon! :D

From: Aliina

Date: 2013-08-09

Chapter: 2

Glad to see you back!


This chapter was really good, I liked how you bounced around with it to. Going from Mike and Chester, to the guys at the studio, Anna, and Talinda. It showed how everyone is affected, and gives the story more dimension.


I like how you set the pace to, now that you can dive right into Bennoda doesn't mean you have to just yet. Mike's guilt isn't going to disappear out of thin air. I just hope that things don't take too long to progress because I feel like Chester could use the truth. Every time he asks why his life is crumbling around him all he gets is someone saying where he is isn't where he belongs. That's gotta be frustrating, even with him starting to realize Mike is the first thing he sees when he thinks about home and happiness.


You never cease to amaze me with the realistic qualities your writing has. If I didn't know any better I'd think this story is playing out right now. That is something even I have trouble with; keeping it a fiction story, but not making it ridiculously fake. But I think it comes easy to you because of how well you do it.


Can't wait for the next update, and don't worry about taking a long break. The best never came from cramming ideas in little time. But as a fan who craves more ... just don't take too long :P


-Jack

From: Blackeyes

Date: 2013-08-09

Chapter: 2

F I N A L L Y.


ITS BEEN TOOOOOO LOOONG MAAAN. TOOO LOOOONG. BUT I FORGIVE YOU BECAUSE THIS, THIS CHAPT OH MY EMOTIONS. Seriously, there's SO MANY feels in this chapt I almost cried, every single of your chapter makes me tremble. It's just, it's been too long since I read something like this. Every detail, emotion, the relationship with the other guys, even the dogs, you put them all in one. It's just so fuckin perfect God. I love how you don't rush things, even though Chester's ignorance makes me go all crazy sometimes, and how he hurts Mike's feelings without realizing it. I LOVE IT. This is your first story and it's already flawless. I just don't know how to describe how much I love your writing style, this story, and the connection between them all, it's just too much to handle. The affection between Mike and Chester is just so right in my feels. AND THE GUYS. You didn't forget about them. Even this is a Bennoda story, the guys are as important as them. Without the guys it makes things look fake and not as strong, you know.


This story is just so perfect and I BEG YOU to finish this gold ok. Lots of love from me<3

From: SenjerTheAvenger

Date: 2013-05-25

Chapter: 2

*smiles in tears* oh sweetie that's awesome :)

probably the best story i've ever read

seems like everyone likes Mike being tortured in his life :|

but all in all, you're a great author

keep updating honey

good luck ;)

From: Karine

Date: 2013-05-21

Chapter: 2

updaaaaaaate i need iiiiiiiit

From: chester1111

Date: 2013-03-19

Chapter: 2

I almost had a heart attack when I saw you updated Woo hoo. I like how you are depicting Talinda. she is making a really tough decision but she is being very good about it and understands it is for the best. It Is better for her to just do it. She knows Chester but I wouldn't want to sit around knowing that ches adores Mike in a way he will never care for her. I think it is time to focus on Mike and Chester and what is happening between them . Mike needs to stop being a martyr about it and explain. It isn't fair to Chester to be the only one in the dark.

From: chester1111

Date: 2013-03-19

Chapter: 2

I almost had a heart attack when I saw you updated Woo hoo. I like how you are depicting Talinda. she is making a really tough decision but she is being very good about it and understands it is for the best. It Is better for her to just do it. She knows Chester loves her but I wouldn't want to sit around knowing that ches adores I think it is time to focus on my congestion nothing to talk about their feelings in from 9 to stop being a martyr about it

From: JocelynJaded

Date: 2013-03-18

Chapter: 2

Long time no see? I'm glad to see you back!

This was an action packed chapter!! It was good. And I'm glad that Anna finally asked for a divorce. They need closure. And I really hope that she doesn't get full custody...that would be sad.

From: Aliina

Date: 2013-03-18

Chapter: 2

Ohmygod, my feels are on the fritz. This chapter is kinda where it all starts, after this it's just basically Mike and Chester. All they have now is each other- and their kids, but the way it looks now that is a bumpy road. I really admire Talinda for the way she gives up her love for Chester and Mike's love. But I want to strangle Anna till she turns blue. (So much for my passive aggression huh :P) My heart goes out to every one, especially Mike because not only is his soon to be ex-wife keeping his son from him, he feels it's his fault for Chester's situation. I'm really looking forward to what happens next. Maybe Chester will bug Mike to tell him what else is bothering him and Mike will kinda explode and spill his secret, only to be met with loving arms.


This update made my day! I'm so happy you're back! Can't wait for more.

From: striped

Date: 2013-03-18

Chapter: 2

I CAN'T OMG. THIS HURTS SO MUCH

BUT I STILL LOVE IT

AAH

From: noalinkinpark

Date: 2013-03-18

Chapter: 2

HOLY FUCK BALLS AN UPDATE gosh i love reading this story. my heart breaks for the kids <\33 I always love reading this nd knowing myself I will surely re-read this chap soon<33

From: dri-dri93

Date: 2013-03-18

Chapter: 2

Ohmygod. The feels in this chapter are almost too much. First Mike and Talinda, then Chaz and Talinda, then Anna and Mike. I sure hope this lightens up...I think I'm scaring my classmates lol. They're wondering why I'm laughing and crying and giggling all at the same time. Amazing job. I really have to feel awful for Mike. He's just caught in the middle of all of this. Same for the other guys. I like that you gave us that little shot of them, to sort of expand the story (does Robbie have a girlfriend? ;D). Absolutely amazing job. <3

From: eba

Date: 2013-03-18

Chapter: 2

Oh my GOD, I am so so happy you updated this story! I love this so much.

I love all the tension in this chapter, and I too love Talinda. :) I can't wait to see what happens next.

From: Aliina

Date: 2013-02-23

Chapter: 1

UPDATE, PLEASE I BEG YOUUU !!!

From: Karine

Date: 2012-12-05

Chapter: 1

I check RU every time I come to this site to see if you've updated but I'm always massively disappointed cause you haven't and I just need your story to continue ;_;

From: lpfmsoldier

Date: 2012-10-19

Chapter: 1

Great way to end the chapter!! Well,this is my first time to review on your fanfic but i've read this story a long time ago sorry for the late review.


I enjoy reading this so much! It has the perfect amount of Bennoda in it. Your story is very realistic and i love it! That kiss at the last was brilliant and very cute! I love bennoda so much. I'll be waiting for your next update :)

From: noalinkinpark

Date: 2012-10-15

Chapter: 1

sbsoqvskwba I can't belive i didn't review this yet, But we just finushed an exam and have free time so i decided to re-read the last chap *__* PERFECTIONODA HOLY SWEET LORD THAT IS MIKE SHINODA I CAN'T BELIVE HOW I MUCH LOVE THIS FIC!! while reading this chap I was like "Oh no please don't let this have a sad end!" But then Mike brought chester his children nd they were all cute and made me go abdowbsi AWWW nd then Ches sneaked a kiss to Mike!!!! :oooo Oooooooh I wonder how he will react..!!!! they seem to be so comfy next to each other so it could pass by like it is a normal thing, BUT maybe mike will think of What Talinda said about him and chester and will feel confused...??? idk! I can't wait till next update! I have no other choice though *pout* Peace out! G I'm pretty hyper o.O

From: Penelope_Ink

Date: 2012-10-14

Chapter: 1

ohh when i found out i missed the 8th chapter cos i didnt get what happened before Tailand's choice at the beginning of the last chapter, i wanted to hit myself. And sorry for my serious late review for it. i just felt so tired recently. Reading Roads Untralved made me feel more exhausted. i dont mean it was bad, on the contrast, that's extremely realistic. however sometimes i'd like to throw myself in imaginary world to stay away from the realty.


Back to the fic. in fact i read it the day when you updated. Blame me as hardly as you can, i just didnt feel right to write a review immediately, as what i said, that's the problem of mine. i used to read the sort of women-stay-away fics and never into some fics like this. From the point of my view, i should have been happy when T left Chester because finally Chester wouldn't be tortured by the guilty of cheat in later. But all i felt was sad to her. Damn you just made me love her, treat her like a friend of mine. I just wanted to hold her, constantly saying her choice was right to her to make her feel little better. She must loved Chester too much deeply to sacrifice herself.


For Mike, im glad he was there for Chester, comforting him like Chester did before. My haert was beating when he and Chester sang together, looking straight into the other's eyes. God they just fall into each other with all their hearts. And when they stayed with their children. you know there was not only love between them, but also the bond of family. i believe that the love betweem them would be revealed eventually cos it was so strong and deep. Mike just needed a chance and for Chester, it was time he needed. even if that's kind of hurt to see Chester hadnt realized his heart yet.


And the last thing i wanna say is that they had a bunch of great friends and family around them(well except for someone) which was sort of treasure in their lives.

From: chester1111

Date: 2012-10-10

Chapter: 1

I think Talinda did the right thing and like she said she god it for her. I can't imagine how it would feel to have a wonderful loving husband but to know that he loved and adored someone else. To make it worse Chester didn't see it. I look forward to the guys progressing in their relationship soon. I can't wait for some conscious affectionate bennoda.

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