Holy crap this was so amazing for a oneshot, I LOVED IT.
From: Black Cat
I really love your stories. It was deep, emotional and inspiring. Glad that Mike has fight to live. Yeah, honestly, sometimes I want to kill myself, because I think I am not worth living. But I stop myself. Now your story gives me another reason to keep moving on: "Don't do something that you'll regret later." The way you describe Mike's emotions was very clear and deep. The flow of the incidents was very logical. I like your work, nice :) Thank you for the wonderful story.
Wow really good one shot! I thought it would be some bennoda or something but you shocked me! Lol I really loved this because it had that authentic feel to it. Like even with the guardian angel watching over him and keeping from doing stuff it still felt real cuz and maybe we do have angels watching over us. Not in the forms of our friends, but actual angels being governed by a higher power. It really just gives us hope to keep on going when things get bad and seem impossible to cope with. But the answer to Mike's question really touched my heart: I didn't save you because you needed it, I saved you because someone else did. Those were beautiful words and this whole story was well written. So good job!:)
From: Lost In the Echo
Is this the first time you've written something NOT bennoda? Lol well thank you cuz that means I can read it without gagging. No offense but I'm a guy(a straight one at that) and well I have my preferences:P But anyway wow I'm glad I took the time to read this cuz you, dear, are an excellent writer. I mean I totally felt that emotion you put into your writing and I got the message too. Life is too short to sit around complaining when some one out there always has it worse than you. Yes Mike did a terrible thing, and Rob did an even more terrible thing. Some might say he deserved it. Some might say that Mike was in the wrong. But in the end it doesn't really matter because as you said we all die, whether by natural causes or someone deciding to take their life into their hands. But Chester was there to make sure Mike didn't become one of them because someone out there would need him one day. This is going into my favorites and I hope you write more stories like this; you're really good!
You did an awesome job. My friend, and it is emotional. XD, ME LIKEY!!!!!!! ME LOVE!!!! :-) :-) :-) :-) :-)
From: Kirby S.
This is very emotional and at some points even inspirational. I really enjoy this story and that lesson behind it: don't do anything you would come regret later on.
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