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Truth Inside A Lie by Emma Shinoda

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From: metalidentity

Date: 2014-06-17

Chapter: 1

awesome story! very original, i really liked it

From: RASH

Date: 2014-06-05

Chapter: 1

I LOVE YOU

From: nachteule

Date: 2014-06-03

Chapter: 1

... Wow. This was original and creative and definitely not what I was expecting when I started reading. It was so much better!! A few people on here know that I'm a sick and mean person and I'm always up for an UNhappy ending, so I really loved this. Great job, I can't wait for Sometimes I Don't Make Sense, and any other stories or one-shots you come up with in the meantime

From: eggplant

Date: 2014-06-02

Chapter: 1

Awesome story

From: Iwantnobody03

Date: 2014-06-02

Chapter: 1

Pffff....I SO ADDED THIS FANFIC TO MY FAVS DARLING ! ;) tAKE cARE !

From: Dinahsaur

Date: 2014-06-02

Chapter: 1

Mother of fat monkeys, I am absolutely taken by this story. Wow. Wow. Wow. That's all I can say, Jesus, the way you kept the suspense, I almost died. The most eerie part was obviously the "flash" that happened when Chester bent to pick the blade... God, I got the creeps. You wrote this brilliantly, I'm so impressed. Poor little Chester, I even started feeling angry at the rest of them. Rated 10, without a doubt. Brilliant stuff, simply brilliant.

From: Mikey boy

Date: 2014-06-02

Chapter: 1

It's great to see your name with another story here. Don't worry if your updates are slow, I think we'll enjoy the story even more like that. ;) So, on the story. Wow. This completely blew my mind. I felt something was wrong since the beginning, with all Chester's nervousness and then how he started missing pieces one by one. The hospital experience was terrible, and even later when he searched for his bandmates, but none of them existed.. So painful... I was hoping it would be just a joke from them, or even a bad dream, but the ending totally shocked me... Poor Chaz... ;(

Sorry for the late review, I'm very busy lately, but whew, I can find some peace here.. Great, great job with this! You're awesome :) Can't wait for Sometimes I Don't Make Sense, and why not, a new story if you'd like to share.

From: trishia

Date: 2014-06-02

Chapter: 1

beautiful..*cries heavy tears* beautiful

From: Chesterella

Date: 2014-06-01

Chapter: 1

loved it very schizzophrenic and scary. The way I like stories. confused but perfect...

good story!

From: Hailey

Date: 2014-06-01

Chapter: 1

So sad. Poor Chaz. He makes me sad too :-( LP is real Chaz..

From: NatalyT

Date: 2014-06-01

Chapter: 1

poor chaz sounds too sick I almost got sick too lmao I love that you write good as it is here... love your style ♡ I hate that it was a lie it made me feel lp is a lie in real life too lmao noo

From: Crimson

Date: 2014-06-01

Chapter: 1

That was so unexpected! And really really good! Throughout the story, I was going "what the hell?" with poor Chester as the guys started to act strange. I felt so bad at how frustrated he got but I probably would've reacted the same way. The ending really got me. His happiness wasn't even real. Poor Chaz :( awesome story!

From: silver_glepha

Date: 2014-06-01

Chapter: 1

I liked it, well-written. Unexpected plot. Strange setting, will do for a nice thriller movie.


Thank you , dear!

From: paula orlandini

Date: 2014-06-01

Chapter: 1

Wonderful! An amazing story with a happy beginning but that soon transforms into a nightmare. The fear, the confusion of Chez also grows into the reader ....

I kept reading and I was more and more afraid, I did not understand ...

In the end, it all becomes clear .... I cried... poor Chez, his happiness was a lie.

You are talented!

From: nab

Date: 2014-05-31

Chapter: 1

Very original. And scary. Imagine if u wake up one day and realise that everything u know is a lie. I'd have a nervous breakdown.

From: nothing.nowhere

Date: 2014-05-31

Chapter: 1

Holy Shinoda, this was amazing! Update soon please!

From: wz

Date: 2014-05-31

Chapter: 1

I'm literally going crazy reading this over and over because holy.... It was insane. I first was happy about the usual familiar band and the relationships, the friendships and the usual atmosphere, but then something happened and Chester started going crazy..? I didn't know what to think because I wasn't expecting anything to fade like that and that fast. That was really crazy, you got me crying at the end. The thought of everything being a fantasy because of his illness was the right button to make my lip quiver. It was amazing and so much anxiety, it's impressive. Fortunately it's a oneshot, I would've died if this was a longer story Hahaha Great job as usual Emma!

From: Mikeyy shinizzle

Date: 2014-05-31

Chapter: 1

This is amazing. I love the idea of the band being a dream. Is there gonna be a second chap? Its really awesome!

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