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Took what I hated and made it a part of me by .ray

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From: miss.amy

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Date: 2003-11-02

Chapter: ?

aww...so close...

dravens got to be the cutest lil thing ever!! (next to mikey and chazzums of course)...poor sam tho... heh..wait, no... screw sam...

From: Holly

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Date: 2003-11-01

Chapter: ?

aww it's not mikey's fault... chester wanted it too, and it wouldve happened eventually anyway.


this is awesome though... i love this story :)


update soon!

From: .bennizzle.jizzle.

Email: cantankerouscancercaitiff@yahoo.com

Date: 2003-11-01

Chapter: ?

oh no!

hahahahaha, they were the stupid ones...


anyway, update soon! i wanna kno who he'll choose!

From: Linny

Email: Dizzy224224@aol.com

Date: 2003-11-01

Chapter: ?

Oh my God! Oh my God! Oh my God!

You just can't stop here! You have to continue! UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!!!!!

From: prissygirl

Email: prissy@bayou.com

Date: 2003-11-01

Chapter: ?

Oh Crap-ola *gasps* PLEASE UPDATE

From: mest_up1

Email: mest_up1@yahoo.com

Date: 2003-11-01

Chapter: ?

:'( everything was doing fine :'( but it's better if sam's not in the way ;) lol she had to find out a way or another huh... update!

From: Julie

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Date: 2003-11-01

Chapter: ?

My poor Mikey :(

From: ella

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Date: 2003-11-01

Chapter: ?

omg...mike and chester just need to be together ( even though I feel kinda sorry for Sam at the moment )...please make make the guys happy, okay ? they just gotta be together and esp. Mike deserves someone as special as Chester. Please update soon =)

From: kasai

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Date: 2003-11-01

Chapter: ?

Happy Belated halloween to you to! ^.^ Wonderful chapter!! Wonderful!! Poor Mikey though... don't think that!! :( Can't wait to see what happens though! Update soon!

From: sparklefinger

Email: sparklefinger@hotmail.com

Date: 2003-10-31

Chapter: ?

wonderfluffynessnessnessness

From: Thomas

Email: skyler.gibson@comcast.net

Date: 2003-10-30

Chapter: ?

your of the other speices too? thats just down right awesome, finally, a guy who writes one of the greatest stories of our young generation, I applaud you Ray. and keep on writing Ray, you were born to write, you've got a special talent that draws people, like a moth to a flame...... great story, I'd love to hear more from you. and of course, I'd love to hear your stories..... Like you, I too, am a male. Who loves Chester and Mike..... sadly they are straight.... but, we have dark fantasies, no? Please carry on with this story.... I am quite interested.

From: yet again... another crazy guy, who has a mullet, and listens to old 90's music no,its not Joe Dirt

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Date: 2003-10-30

Chapter: ?

DUDE!!!! TOTALLY IS AWESOME! I LIKE WRITE IN BIG FONT TO, LIKE, IMPRESS YOU MAN!!! HAW HAW!!!

BUT SERIOUSLY, YOU GOTTA, LIKE, UPDATE MAN..... HEY, LIKE HOW DID I, LIKE, GET THIS COMPUTER?!!! AWESOME!!! HAW HAW!!!

From: A really crazy guy, who has a mullet, and listens to old 90's music.... no, not Joe Dirt

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Date: 2003-10-30

Chapter: ?

HEY MAN!!! dude! dont just leave it there man! you gotta, like, update man!!! TOTALLY RAWKS!!!


\m/ rock on BROTHAH!!!

From: Kasai

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Date: 2003-10-30

Chapter: ?

Yay! Another fantastic chapter!! Lovin' how long they are!! Great great job!! Can't wait to see what happens next! Update soon!! ^.^

From: Halina_Renata

Email: halina_renta@hotmail.com

Date: 2003-10-30

Chapter: ?

Hey, it doesn't matter if you don't get to the slashy stuff straight away. the way you are going right now is absolutely brilliant. you can really feel Mike's pain, not only about Mark but the other things that are affecting him because of his abuse. the hurt really showed.

keep up the good work!

From: oz lp fan

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Date: 2003-10-30

Chapter: ?

update soon please!

From: self-inflictingwounds

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Date: 2003-10-29

Chapter: ?

Hey, that chappy was pretty good, I like. Oh, btw, do you take requests? If so, I was thinkin that maybe- I dunno...... I forgot, anyways, please finish!!! ^_~

From: gothic

Email: gothicchick662000@yahoo.com

Date: 2003-10-29

Chapter: ?

OMYFUCKINGGAWD! I am SO SORRY ray!!!

Im such a fucking idiot! Please forgive me, god! I can be such a fucking retard sometimes..... sorry.

From: miss.amy

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Date: 2003-10-29

Chapter: ?

awwwwwwwww mikey is PMSing... what a cutie!!!

hehee...this chapter was assfuckin great...

From: mest_up1

Email: mest_up1@yahoo.com

Date: 2003-10-29

Chapter: ?

:) all good! it's not boring not even one bit :) ... i loved this mood swing chapter :D ... keep going! it's perfect the way it is!

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