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The Doodler by BSkyeSoldier

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From: Papercutie

Date: 2015-05-14

Chapter: 1

I think at some point, Mike might hurt Chester. I think he can't stop killing. Cool story :)

From: wz

Date: 2015-05-11

Chapter: 1

That was amazing and really creepy, I loved it. Rated 10

From: nab

Date: 2015-05-10

Chapter: 1

That was amazing. Totally unexpected. It's ironic that the killer don't want to kill the suicidal man. Haha. Rated

From: Penelope_Ink

Date: 2015-05-09

Chapter: 1

It's interesting but like you said, lack of some reality. However I like your thought about the story. I don't think Mike would stop killing. He might hurt people when chester was not around. And one day chester would find out.

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