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From: nab

Date: 2015-09-22

Chapter: 2

This is getting better and better. Thanks for updating. Chester's padt is bitter sweet to read. Wait! Does this means Brian knows who or what Chester really is? The 'shit up' bit was hilarious. Great to have some comic relief between the serious drama. Rated

From: Penelope_Ink

Date: 2015-09-08

Chapter: 2

I was so lost over the first half of this chapter. But, it was a dream? Right? That Chester had while he was passed out? And the "changing" part at the end with Brian didn't really happen...right? Sorry, I think maybe my brain is half asleep lol


I love the wings and the way you described them, and especially how they juxtapose with the girl's. Fire, water...are we going to get earth and air too? I've never watched that anime, I don't really watch anime, so I'm only guessing here :)


I love all of Mike's concern, and how he feels helpless. It must be eating him up to be in that position. And Simon doesn't seem like the masterminded evil guy I originally took him for. He seems pretty lost.


It's the girl. She's the mastermind.


Update soon, I want to see what will happen next :)

From: BradRockZ

Date: 2015-09-07

Chapter: 2

Oooo i'm lovin' this. I love the Picture of Chester's wings. I thought They were like angle type like in most 'chester!Angel' fics but this was very diffrent. And entirely diffrent for me cuz' i did'nt watch that Anime. I loved reading the whole description of his wings, i was soooo dreamy while reading about it.

I see you cleared the meaning of 'Onii-chan' in There for the readers, but i already knew it! :P

Another thing i was debating about is that, is Chester a devil?, cuz' i figured he can't be an angel or is he something entirely different?

I'm getting excited over this fic, Man i adore fantasy and linkin park, and a combination of both for me is a bucket full of goodies!

From: Screamingsilently

Date: 2015-09-06

Chapter: ?

What a nice first chapter, fantasy is so rare on this site. I wish I could find more stories of this genre. I agree with Penelope on Simon, I don't really trust him either he looks suspicious. Chester with wings is amazing though, I remember an old story describing the same. So beautiful!

From: BradRockZ

Date: 2015-09-03

Chapter: ?

I really like fantasy, i most of the times imagine LP in fantasy situations and it always goes too far that I can't put it into words.

But you did! And i think That's some talent i dont have.

i loved the way you discribed Rebecca, you discribed her so perfect, just like the girls in those mangas!

And I was a manga lover, till the age of 14......later, from 15 i became a bands lover.

I used to write manga fiction back than.....


Yeah, so i really loved this, wanna kno whats next and wonder if the other guys will get Supernatural powers too!

Rated!

From: nab

Date: 2015-08-31

Chapter: ?

I'm not familiar with manga and anything associated with it. So this fic is a whole new experience for me. Oh my goodness.... that was awesome. I love how fluidly the story flows. Rated.

From: Penelope_Ink

Date: 2015-08-30

Chapter: ?

I love fantasy :) I'm happy to see more of it here. I can't wait to see what happens. I don't trust this Simon guy, I'm on Chester's side with that. Did Simon make the wings appear? He obviously had something to do with it. I can just hear the phone calls to the LP lawyers now.


Them walking through the zoo was cute though, Mike dragging Chester along. And then the leaving of the note lol made me laugh how they all turned to Mike for what it should say.


The girl is kind of creepy. Then again, she is a mini-Simon, so we'll see. It's an interesting start - rated :)

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