Damn...that hurts so much. I love how you potray the memories. It's like I was there too.
so sad........... ;_______;
I agree with Razor. This was poetic, but wicked sad. Poor Brad, trying to drink away the ghost that haunts him. The regret. I don't know, it had a kind of tragic beauty to it. I love the concept and how she pulled him through the memories that led to the end. And there, at the end, he was left desperate and alone, and on Christmas! Talk about a kick when you're down.
I think my favorite part was when he drank the half a bottle, and then couldn't understand why she was still there, why it hadn't worked this time. Almost like he had somehow built up a tolerance for her, for the memories, and now he couldn't drink them away.
This gets extra stars for being tragic. Great tragedies are few and far between. Rated :)
This was very emotional and sad. Although the part were Brad died did seem rather abrupt, everything else flowed perfectly. I loved the way you depicted Brad's emotions and how he was being forced to watch his memories play out in front of him. The whole thing seemed rather poetic, thank you for sharing this. ❤️
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