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Shadows (The Sea Of Cheese) by Penelope_Ink

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From: Kasai

Date: 2016-07-05

Chapter: 1

Ooh I loved every single thing about this!!! I was laughing hysterically while reading - hands down my new favorite fix! Chester is hilarious!!! From start to finish this had LP Cheesey goodness written allllll over it! I love coming across stories like this! They make me smile and it's something I can come back to over and over again! Love love love it!!!

From: A.N.

Date: 2016-05-31

Chapter: 1

I like this so much! It's so adorable the way you set everything up! I had a lot of fave parts, but I think my favorite was when Brad was telling Mike he made them feel like they had to ask permission to take breaks, but he could whenever he wanted. I like this because it says so much about Mike, in a very short and subtle way. Really good writing.


(BTW, I updated Playing with a Dragon).

From: nab

Date: 2016-03-20

Chapter: 1

That was freakin hilarious. You're amazing at this. I kept picturing Chester's face scrunched up in annoyance when his pirates starts flirting.


“Why is it when you want a break it’s set in gold, but when anyone else wants a break, we have to submit it to you in writing? In triplicate,”


That line is so true. It totally describes Mike's status quo in the band. Nicely done. I couldn't stop laughing.


Greay job. As always.

From: BradRockZ

Date: 2016-03-07

Chapter: 1

Chester was Sooooo half of the Mary sue thing! This was so funny and so good! So hilarious! And I can sooo relate to Chester when he wrote and asked about the helm. When I was writing my pirate story I did exactly the same and ended up googling it!

My Jaw dropped every time the names were revealed, Rob the rascal? And Bradford the very bad? I wonder what was Chester holding against them? Joe's and Dave's were cool though. And Chester and Mike's were really funny because it like, set vice versa..ya knw Chester should have been the nervous one :P

I'm gonna sleep with a smile now thank you so much!!

From: paula orlandini

Date: 2016-03-06

Chapter: 1

A funny and hilarous story !

I loved Chester.

It must be terrible when the characters are so gay! Poor Chester!

Brilliant idea! My Sunday began with a smile!

Thank you!

From: Blackblood

Date: 2016-03-05

Chapter: 1

I meant the names of the characters in Chesters story not your title. Honestly the funnier the name of the story the more likely it is that I'll click on it.

From: Blackblood

Date: 2016-03-05

Chapter: 1

That was hilarious. poor Chester aside from the names of the story wasn't bad. It's just like him to make Mike act like that and be the strong one himself lol.

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