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Standing in the middle by MissDomho

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From: sugarsea

Date: 2017-08-23

Chapter: 13

So glad to see such a great story right now

From: paula orlandini

Date: 2017-08-23

Chapter: 13

Awesome chapter!

Poor Chester, he always believed that he was worth nothing in comparison with Mike ... he was so unselfish about himself ...

I worshiped when you write that he knows to make the wrong choice but that is also the only right thing .... poor Chester!

Instead Mike is more fortunate, he has a real friend to trust.

And now what will happen?

Great job !!

From: paula orlandini

Date: 2017-08-20

Chapter: 12

Hot! Hot! Hot! But realistic and slow!

I really like it!

They don't fuck , they love each other!!

great chapter!!

From: KingMichael

Date: 2017-08-20

Chapter: 12

This's the hottest finger fuck I've ever read. it's not just a smut chapter, you gave me a impressive vision of their struggling inside. How desperately they wanted each other, meanwhile, they denied the feeling they had for one another. That's really touching. I felt glad they faced their own's heart finally, to across the line and sink into love.

From: paula orlandini

Date: 2017-08-18

Chapter: 11

Here I am! You update so fast, I did not manage to leave reviews.

I like these chapters a lot, there is a slow evolution of their relationship and this makes everything more realistic.

I like Brad's figure: he's a real friend.

Now the passion is about to explode .....

Brava, great job!

From: Bennoda_Lover

Date: 2017-08-17

Chapter: 10

Omfg. No words

From: KingMichael

Date: 2017-08-17

Chapter: 10

Oh shit, Chester finger fucked himself with the imagination of Mike fucking him? That's too hot. I read the part twice haha. It's cute that Mike was jealous of the girl teasing Chester. he really cared that=] I wonder what they were gonna talk? Or even more than talk?*evil*

From: KingMichael

Date: 2017-08-13

Chapter: 8

The last two chapters are awesome. The guilty pleasure kiss under rain was so hot. I could understand those two struggled hardly with theirselves. they were both married and had kids to care. But the things between them had been growing up since they were much younger, before they got married. It's unstoppable...

From: paula orlandini

Date: 2017-08-12

Chapter: 7

Oh what hot chapter! This is a great kiss!

The description is gorgeous, I felt their excitement grow.

Poor Chester ..... with a word he ruined everything.

But I don't think Mike can hide himself too long!

Great work! keep it up!!

From: Bennoda_Lover

Date: 2017-08-12

Chapter: 7

At the beginning I was just waiting for Rob to have been watching everything go down but my god, that was fucking hot. I can't wait to see exactly how Mike will feel about what just happened

From: paula orlandini

Date: 2017-08-10

Chapter: 6

I like this story leaving room to other members of the band, I love seeing the guys in action.

Rob is always considered the most wise and I like him so much.

Now Mike and Chester understand that they feel something to each other, they do not really know what feelings are but at least they admit it.

I'm sorry a bit that their second kiss is due to the weed but .....

Great work! Thank you!!

From: paula orlandini

Date: 2017-08-09

Chapter: 5

You can't leave me that way !!! I need to know what's going to happen!

I want to know why Mike is so angry.

Poor Chester .... he's so helpless .... you want to hug him right now!

Don't make me wait too much for the next chapter.

I like the slowness of history: it would not be credible if in the first chapter they did sex!

Brava!

From: Bennoda_Lover

Date: 2017-08-08

Chapter: 5

Loving this story so far and I can't wit to see what happens next!

From: paula orlandini

Date: 2017-08-08

Chapter: 4

Oh a kiss !!

A very innocent kiss but I'm glad Chester kissed Mike.

Now Mike has to think well of his feelings. Will he be sincere or deny his feelings because of fear?

I'm just curious to see what's going to happen!

Thanks for posting!

Ah .... good house moving!

From: KingMichael

Date: 2017-08-08

Chapter: 4

You updated it so fast. I love that. But no thing more exciting than the kiss between Chester and Mike😄 can't wait what will happen the night!

From: paula orlandini

Date: 2017-08-07

Chapter: 4

Ah hangovers are painful!

But Mike's problem is the shame .... he would like to forget but he has already spoken.

What does Chester feel instead? I believe that for Chester to know that Mike can kiss men is scary ...... exciting but scary .....

I wonder if he is afraid of anything that might happen.

Unfortunately I had warned you that the site is dead, no one leaves any comments .... nothing.

I hope you will continue here otherwise I will follow you on A3O.

Just please don't leave without a word !! It's so frustrating !!

See you soon!

From: paula orlandini

Date: 2017-08-06

Chapter: 3

I like this chapter! Very interesting.

While we are already accustomed to Chester uninhibited and curious, it's different to see Mike in situations "not customary".

And so Mike has his secrets ...... I can't wait to find out what they are.

I wonder if in this story there will also be feelings or just physical passion? I'm a romantic girl, you known!

Nice and interesting, you continue please !!

From: paula orlandini

Date: 2017-08-04

Chapter: 2

Wow you posted at the speed of light! Great!

Also the second chapter is very interesting ..... there is all this sexual tension between them.

I like Chester still convinced he feels the lack of Talinda! Dreamer!

I don't understand what the thoughts of Mike are... Is he aware of the sexual attraction amongst them?

I can't wait to find out !!

Thank you for sharing!

From: KingMichael

Date: 2017-08-04

Chapter: 2

INTERESTING! Can't wait to see the next chapter. Thank you for the story. It makes me feel like he's still here.

From: paula orlandini

Date: 2017-08-03

Chapter: 1

This first chapter is very interesting.

For years this site has been abandoned, it is a pleasure to find a new story.

I believe that ff are also used to remember Chester .....

I like this start .... the descriptions are very accurate and the thoughts of poor Chester are very vivid!

I am very curious to read how this story will continue .... I hope you continue to post even if you receive few reviews as the site is almost dead ....

I look forward to the next chapter!

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