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A Happy End by Umi

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From: Aliina

Date: 2017-10-11

Chapter: 1

Glad to be finally able to review here also. I know I already did it on the other site but still. Great story, first time I read it was really ( since I read it waking up) hard..... had to go see if that was not true. Still, rereading it now..... still can feel the emotions that go through this all.

From: Penelope_Ink

Date: 2017-09-29

Chapter: 1

This was so well done. Love the writing style and the plot...something that could have very easily happened. Great job with the pics...maybe too good a job. It was nice and eerie. I'm glad this had a happy ending and that Mike was alright in the end. I really like the line about...if he would have planned it, he wouldn't have failed. Seems like something Mike would really say/think. Rated for you.

From: hattu

Date: 2017-08-31

Chapter: 1

Wow, that was sooo disturbingly, sadly realistic. Freakly realistic.

Had to pinch myself, to remind me it isn't real.


Great work with the pictures, Great writing!


Thank you for sharing!

From: MissDomho

Date: 2017-08-28

Chapter: 1

Omg...I'm choking...this story was wonderful to read and very difficult to read for most parts. It was so well written I love the authenticity in your story as it felt so real <3 thank you for blessing us with this great story it was truly aspiring xo

From: Gummibear Queen

Date: 2017-08-27

Chapter: 1

Wow!

That was a difficult read. Incredible but difficult to read.


Much too real and emotional, taking from current issues and a great use of Twitter. I got so anxious at one point thinking it was real.


Well written and heartbreaking 💙

From: paula orlandini

Date: 2017-08-26

Chapter: 1

I have no words.....amazing story.

I have to stop to read several times because it's so sad and realistic...

Mike's pain is.....enomours. I can't immagine his loss.

You are a wonderful writer.Thank you for sharing.

From: ALifeForMusic

Date: 2017-08-26

Chapter: ?

This is extremely well-written. It's a little hard to read, because it's so... realistic. But you did an amazing job, especially with including these tweets etc!

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