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Because Of You by Penelope_Ink

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From: squashie

Date: 2017-11-14

Chapter: 8

Hoooooly shitballs that took a dramatic and unexpected turn! Waiting for the next instalment with bated breath! You write SO well. I love this story.

From: xX_LP4Life_05_Xx

Date: 2017-11-14

Chapter: 8

Oh my god. I was on edge the entire time.

From: sheena0929

Date: 2017-11-14

Chapter: 8

Fcuk that was intense.


However which way you want to end this, I'm looking forward to it.

From: lpfan503

Date: 2017-11-14

Chapter: 8

I’m sorry for the second review but I read it again and I’m so anxious. Chester licking up Mike’s face— ugh. He’s lost it. I really, really hope neither of them get hurt. I hope Mike can talk him down. I can’t stand it!! Please don’t wait long to update.

From: lpfan503

Date: 2017-11-14

Chapter: 8

Holy Jeez, I’ve been waiting for this update and it was soooo much better than I could have imagined. I was seriously dreading the hanging, but I figured you’d be able to write it well. This drama is so much better. I hope Joe gets help in time. I can’t wait for what is said once Mike and Chester are alone with the gun, omgomgomg!! This is scary and heart wrenching. And beautifully written, as always.

From: becisamonsta

Date: 2017-11-10

Chapter: 7

Lol I definitely think Chester could pull of the whole being pregnant with Mike's baby! Hahah!!!

I can't believe what Chester did, I wish Mike came to Chester sooner. Great story so far!

From: Bella likes it here

Date: 2017-11-08

Chapter: 7

Finally! No longer a lurker!

I love this story! So well written:) the characters are so well written in this. Poor Chester the poor man has suffered so much that it makes me want to cry and to think that this could have been true with what he was feeling.

I love the bennoda in this story so cute and hot :)

Thank you so much for this truly amazing story xxxx

From: Bennoda4life*

Date: 2017-11-06

Chapter: 7

Lmao! At everyone thinking Anna is pregnant! Poor Chester it was like a kick to his stomach when he thought she was. Why did Chester cut himself! Why!!! Love this story xoxo

From: Taytay

Date: 2017-11-05

Chapter: 7

Poor Mike that dinner was just... gah! And Chester thinking Anna was pregnant! He seemed so sad and cut up about it. Mike is always there for Chester he should be with Chester :)!! Great update:)

From: xX_LP4Life_05_Xx

Date: 2017-11-05

Chapter: 7

Wow.. is all i can say.. and mike was his savior. Poor Chaz. :( can't wait for the update.

From: ALifeForMusic

Date: 2017-11-05

Chapter: 7

I love this story so much. I can't put it in words, but Chester in this just breaks my heart. Can't wait for the update ♥

From: squashie

Date: 2017-11-04

Chapter: 7

Saw there was a new chapter, opened it and had to actually get up and take a quick walk and do some deep breathing before I could read it. :') I swear to god, this story is going to give me a heart attack. It's so good and so intense. Puts my heart through a blender every time, and this time was no exception.


Holy shit holy shit holy shit. So I guess Mike knows how bad things really are now! AAAH. Poor Chester. I just want him to be okay forever.


Thank you for this amazing new chapter. I'm totally with you on the complicated emotional writers' block front. It's been a rough time! Looking forward to the next instalment, no matter how long it takes.


xx

From: lpfan503

Date: 2017-11-04

Chapter: 7

Oh, God. This made me ugly cry. I haven't ugly cried yet but this did it. You are doing an excellent job of getting inside Chester's mind, working through what we are all still wondering- why? What makes this so hard to read is how realistic it is, I can totally see this happening IRL and I just want to shake everyone around Chester and tell them to wake up! And Mike... I've been struggling so much with thoughts of Mike IRL and if he knew anything was up with Chester, if he's just overwhelmed with guilt now, and how he's carrying on these days. It makes for a particularly tough read right now. But you are writing it so well, I can't stop reading.


In particular, I love your bit about babies needing you (I can see this as his reasoning to have 6 kids...) and then my heart just squeezed with the blood types. Of course Mike would be there, Mike would do anything to save him. Which again, is why my real life mind is struggling with thoughts of Mike so much.


I'm dreading and looking forward to the next chapter so much. Take all the time you need.

From: sheena0929

Date: 2017-11-04

Chapter: 7

I'm really sorry I haven't posted my review of this story, but making amends now and...


I really applaud you putting up that last chapter. I can only imagine how hard it must have been especially after last week's tribute show and your effort is very much appreciated. Everything flowed so well, from Chester's restaurant breakdown until Mike found him in his house.


Looking forward to seeing how you'll wrap this up. :)

From: Bennoda4life*

Date: 2017-10-28

Chapter: 6

This was beautiful! I am so happy Mike found Chester in time and their scene in the bed was amazing <3 this has helped me cope with watching the concert, just wow thank you xoxox

From: squashie

Date: 2017-10-28

Chapter: 6

Sorry it has taken me so long to review your most recent chapter. I'm finally catching up on some reading. Absolutely adored this. Once again you have this amazing ability to take cute/funny/whimsical elements and fuse them with deep/emotional/tragic developments to make this heart-melting bittersweet story that is so compelling and so beautiful. Unnnngh. Please write more. I'm loving this story so much. Finding it impossible to write Bennoda myself after watching the Hollywood Bowl show last night because I just keep crying, so I'm sticking to other things for now, but reading Bennoda helps, and you're an amazing writer. xxx

From: JessLP

Date: 2017-10-25

Chapter: 6

I love the moment hey shared in bed! My bennoda heart exploded!! Thank you for the amazing and wonderful chapter! Xoxo

From: derekbrad

Date: 2017-10-25

Chapter: 6

Pokémon rocks!!!

The fact that you wrote Chester in his pikachu outfit made me cry out in laughter lol XD

I am so glad he didn't jump and that Mike took the short cut, makes me scared to think 'what if he didnt' the moment they shared in bed...omg...wow!

:)

From: becisamonsta

Date: 2017-10-25

Chapter: 6

You almost had me when I thought he was going to jump!

Yay Mike saved the day and even more happiness and love in my heart, the sweet and sneaky bennoda moment in the bed ;) was so hot and cute. Poor Mike being so confused of his thoughts about Chester.

Thank you for an amazing chapter!

From: xX_LP4Life_05_Xx

Date: 2017-10-23

Chapter: 6

Love love love. This was amazing. Cant wait for the next update :)

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