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Joy ride by AaronShinoda

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From: Stefuh

Date: 2017-11-12

Chapter: 1

Wow. That was very very very well written and also really hot! I hope you're going to write more fics! :)

From: SonataNocturne

Date: 2017-11-08

Chapter: 1

Holy fuck! Literally! That was quite a ride (okay I need some sleep). Damn. You're a really good writer :)

From: derekbrad

Date: 2017-10-25

Chapter: 1

Hell yer! Mike is hot ;)

I'm gay for him too lmao!

This was perfect and was very raunchy haha! But why not it is after all LPF and anything goes on this site!

From: becisamonsta

Date: 2017-10-25

Chapter: 1

Wow! This was freekin' hotttttt

Was like reading a x rated porno ;) I love a bit of slash with no plot in my life! I hope to see more of your stuff:)

From: MissDomho

Date: 2017-10-23

Chapter: 1

Yay! Another writer :) you will love LPF if you haven't been on it for long. Make sure you check out the golden oldies as there are so many on here as well as new stories! I love this site <3


Great standalone, was quite hot! Very well written slash haha. Bennoda for ever! I hope to see more of your works :)

Thank you for sharing!

From: Penelope_Ink

Date: 2017-10-23

Chapter: 1

Welcome to LPF!


Favorite line in this story: he's very demanding when it comes to finding the right angle.


hahaha I love that.


This was a totally whimsical read. So lighthearted, despite it being x-rated, which is such a nice touch. And poor Brad. I can see him checking his watch and pacing the floor as he looks out the windows. "Where are they? Late, as usual." lol


Love the bit at the end about cleaning up the dried cum. Consequences of good time :)

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