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so you hit the lights and i'll lock the doors. by frostfall

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From: lpfan503

Date: 2018-03-13

Chapter: 1

** Typos corrected: I love that in the end he realizes it's futile to resist, and I'm glad they have each other.

From: lpfan503

Date: 2018-03-13

Chapter: 1

I just read this again and needed to tell you again how much I love it. While it's awesome this site gets updated so frequently now, it's a double edged sword because gems like this get lost. The post-apocalyptic world has so many different things to offer and interesting ways to set up stories. The way you tell their story is so poignant. All of Mike's resistance to their romantic relationship, and for what reason? I love that end then end he realizes its futile to resist, and I'm glad they have each other. Ugh. This is just so beautiful!!

From: ALifeForMusic

Date: 2017-11-14

Chapter: 1

This is such an interesting story and so well-written! Can't wait for more from you :)

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Date: 2017-11-12

Chapter: 1

This is the kind of story I've been waiting for. I love your writing style, some grammatical errors but it's not a big problem. I'd love to see where this story goes, it's so fresh compared to the usual stories. xxx

From: xX_LP4Life_05_Xx

Date: 2017-11-11

Chapter: 1

Truly like this. Can't wait for more :)

From: Taytay

Date: 2017-11-11

Chapter: 1

Ooohhh interesting!!! Really liked this a lot!

From: lpfan503

Date: 2017-11-11

Chapter: 1

This is amazing. I love the style you wrote in, and the concept of the end of the world makes you think. It's always an interesting idea to think of how people would act/react in that sort of situation. I could see this happening with Mike and Chester for sure. The part where they found A Thousand Suns made my heart ache for them. This is going in my favorites. :)

From: sheena0929

Date: 2017-11-11

Chapter: 1

Sooooooo good!

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