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My Suffering by xX_LP4Life_05_Xx

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From: AaronShinoda

Date: 2017-12-04

Chapter: 1

What a wonderful ending! I seriously was expecting a sad one but then you turned it around for some sweet and well deserving for Chester. I want to slap Mike for stringing Chester along though haha. This was the right amount of everything :)

From: webbie

Date: 2017-12-03

Chapter: 1

Lovely, sweet and with just the right amount angst, though I do feel like Mike would deserve at least a kick in the ass for stringing along Chester and basically his wife too. I do hope he would be better than that. Feel free to write more and thanks for sharing!

From: Stefuh

Date: 2017-12-03

Chapter: 1

Oh my god, that was so well written! And the ending was perfect, I'm so happy that they got together and that Mike proposed to Chester, that was so sweet and aaah. Loved it! :D

From: Taytay

Date: 2017-12-03

Chapter: 1

Wow. First of all I am so sorry that you are going through that personally :( and second of all, this story is amazing. Poor Chester I couldn't help but thought that Mike had been stringing him along for so many years because of Mike I am just glad that in the end Mike came to his senses and left Anna so they could finally be together. What turned out as an angst ended in romance. I love romantic endings xox

From: Bennoda4life*

Date: 2017-12-03

Chapter: 1

This was amazing to read. Loved that they finally found their happiness in the end and they ended up together :) I'm a sucker for happy endings and this was so nice to read. Loved it :)

From: Penelope_Ink

Date: 2017-12-03

Chapter: 1

It would be so hard to be the other woman. Well, ok in this case the other man :) But I'm glad they ended up together - truly together - in the end. I love the part with the rings. It was the perfect ending for what they both went through. And seeing how both their marriages ended in a different way and at different times - two years apart! - was an interesting twist to things.


Thank you for sharing this with us. I always adore a happy ending. I'm a sap like that.

From: MissDomho

Date: 2017-12-03

Chapter: 1

This was so beautiful! From start to finish! You had me on the edge of my seat! I can't believe that Tainda had left Chester just like that because she could see that her husband was in love with Mike. I loved how you described them together, so beautifully mesmerising and so well written, just gosh...I am officially speechless. Then Chester had to hide his relationship with Mike for so long even though Mike was still with Anna? That would have been so hard. I couldn't believe that he had left her and that Anna was so selfish to do that to Mike...-but then again, Mike was pretty much doing the same- but with Chester XD

I loved the ending! So beautiful! I loved the exchange of rings and that beautiful declaration for their love. God, this story is beautiful! Thank you so much <3

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