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The Blackout Diner by Technicolorlover

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From: hattu

Date: 2018-04-06

Chapter: 12

Good lord I shouldn’t read this while in the train…people are staring at me weird ……. I can’t help it, there is no way not to laugh…


Poor Mike no Bennington sex and then Anna finds out…

But everybody jumped in for Mike and went to Anna, to get her back to Mike, that was really sweet.

Kinda loved the picture of a bound brad…how didn’t the Benningtons jumped in on the chance…………nevermind


A happy Mike is scaring Brad…………I think he should be more scared that the four won’t keep their hands of each other and I can’t imagine the office closet will fit them all………


Please keep writing!

Yeah and I totally understand you. Just I work in a weird quirky company, I wouldn’t be fired, no, it would probably be broadcasted to the staff worldwide as a special talent… I don’t know what would be more scary ………


Thanks for the update!

Hattu

From: hattu

Date: 2018-04-06

Chapter: 12

Good lord I shouldn’t read this while in the train…people are staring at me weird ……. I can’t help it, there is no way not to laugh…


Poor Mike no Bennington sex and then Anna finds out…

But everybody jumped in for Mike and went to Anna, to get her back to Mike, that was really sweet.

Kinda loved the picture of a bound brad…how didn’t the Benningtons jumped in on the chance…………nevermind


A happy Mike is scaring Brad…………I think he should be more scared that the four won’t keep their hands of each other and I can’t imagine the office closet will fit them all………


Please keep writing!

Yeah and I totally understand you. Just I work in a weird quirky company, I wouldn’t be fired, no, it would probably be broadcasted to the staff worldwide as a special talent… I don’t know what would be more scary ………


Thanks for the update!

Hattu

From: Samweis

Date: 2018-03-29

Chapter: 12

Sorry for my late review, I was super busy and now I'm catching up with writing reviews ;)

The last chapter was great and made me laugh A LOT! Like smiling and giggling in a bus, making everyone else suspicious about my behaviour. But I can't keep it inside, it's just too hilarious! SO I will always come back to your story when I need something funny. And tbh, there are not a lot of people that can write humorous fanfictions. Most of them are ending up a bit stupid, but you are definitely a Master in writing fun stories!

From: Penelope_Ink

Date: 2018-03-17

Chapter: 11

Congrats to Joe for winning! I had to laugh at Chester getting kicked out lol of course he did. And Chris, the owner of "Soundgarden" love it. I have to agree with Brad though, the moment Anna finds out her new boyfriend is involved in a threesome relationship, that he's clearly not giving up, that could really cause some issues.

From: Indee

Date: 2018-03-17

Chapter: 11

I was so excited for the update! Your story is a comically genius! Every chapter never failed to make me laugh xD


This chapter tho'; First, the upset Joe was just so priceless! Yea Joe, let it all out!! Second, the food just seemed so yummy. I was just reading it but it managed to make my tummy growled. so precise and so... yummy! (again). Third, Chester! Oh my.. I just can't believe that guy! He caused ruckus everywhere was the best!! Fourth, MikexChesterxTalinda, so hot! I wonder whether Anna would eventually join them.. (*smirking pervertly*)


ok, enough the rambling. My apologize. Thanks for sharing and waiting for this fabulous comedy :3

From: lpfan503

Date: 2018-03-16

Chapter: 11

THIS IS SO GOOD!


You totally described it just like those shows! (I love them too!) I know I've already said this but I love this little series so much! The little details here and there alluding to Mike and Chester's sexual relationship crack me up, then Mike acting like he doesn't know him when he's being all crazy--- and why not take that shirt off, Ches? LOL. And of course, Brad losing Rock-Paper-Scissors. Haha! I loved this! Glad Joe won!!

From: angieliveshere

Date: 2018-03-16

Chapter: 11

God I am loving this story....I have not being able to stop laughing Haha, ah absolutely am loving it!

From: Violet Raven

Date: 2018-03-14

Chapter: 11

I love this story so much! Priceless. I'm afraid my walls are shaking cause of how much I laugh at every chapter. :D

I can't believe someone would do that - I mean strip in the middle of a diner and then parade on the tables. My life seems so boring right now. :D

So Mike and Anna meet finally. I hope that they incorporate Anna and turn their three-way into awesome four-way relationship. :D


Also... I need to say I love the cameos of other famous musicians. We already had Fall Out Boy, Stone Temple Pilots, Julien K, Styles of Beyond, Kiiara, Halsey, KoRn, Jay Z and who knows who else. :D Btw didn't realize that 'officer Carter' was Jay, until he said that 99 problems line. That was great. :D

From: lpfan503

Date: 2018-02-24

Chapter: 11

I was just thinking how I missed this story yesterday, and here it is! :)


Chester/Talinda/Mike as a thing is just too funny to me. It IS true, there IS such a thing as too much sex. That whole thing is hilarious. I'm interested to see how Anna gets in the mix of this whole thing.


Haha, the spoon. What kind of damage can you do with a spoon? (Did I really just ask that question? I'm kinda afraid of the answer, given some of the rest of the crazy stuff in this story that has happened to you in real life.)


I'll say it again, I'm so glad Brad is getting laid and has that cat! Too cute!

From: Penelope_Ink

Date: 2018-02-24

Chapter: 11

haha oh, I've missed this story :) I LOVE your Chester character. I'm sure I've said that before, but idc. I LOVE him. He's soooo hilarious. He cracks me up no matter what he does! And I love the open relationship with Talinda. They all seem to have so much fun together, so I can totally support it. And now Mike is going to go out with Anna and he's so excited about it lol like it's his first date ever.


And what's with the naked lady?? Oh my gosh. People are so insane. And the poor staff of the diner have to put up with it all the time. Thank goodness the cop was there, and it's not even like they did anything this time. Her going naked and standing on the table and causing a scene - so none of their faults. Hope Rick won't hold it against them.

From: Samweis

Date: 2018-02-24

Chapter: 11

I like the idea of Mike, Ches and Talinda. But I also like Anna, so I'm in a serious conflict here. My suggestion: Ches, Talinda and Anna like each other as well and it's going to be a biiiig family, all together :) That's all I can think of right now, so I will leave you with this thought of mine :P

P.S. Funny chapter and I'm still in love with the cat and Brads hair <3

From: squashie

Date: 2018-02-11

Chapter: 10

HOW ON EARTH ARE YOU MAINTAINING THIS LEVEL OF COMEDY GENIUS? Like... the number of absolutely cracking lines is just mind-blowing. I love your writing. Your ability to put, amongst other things, visual humour into words is just... I'm jealous as fuck, tbh. Sorry for the lack of reviews! Things have been crazy. But I'm catching up now and I just love this. :'D It needs to be a TV sitcom. For real.

From: Penelope_Ink

Date: 2018-02-10

Chapter: 10

Haha it was Rob 😆 and poor Chester not getting any. Now maybe Mike and Talinda will let him play again. Gosh, so much drama between businesses but it made for a good laugh! Too bad the cops had to get involved. I love this story.

From: hattu

Date: 2018-02-10

Chapter: 10

I just found this, shame I didn’t saw it earlier!


Writing comedy is so hard, but you really have a gift here! This is awesome, couldn’t stop laughing!


Love your characters! From control freak Mike over multi father Ches to silent Rob, everything fits so well.


Liked the way got FOB and Scott into this, not to be forgotten the Julian kitchen crew 😁


Please keep going!


Thanks! Hattu

From: Taytay

Date: 2018-02-09

Chapter: 10

Julian cafe?! Lmaoakaaajdhsnsns! This chapter was so funny! Especially the mention of strippers 😏 god I love Rob ❤

From: Bennoda4life*

Date: 2018-02-09

Chapter: 10

Lmao! This story packs all kinds of funny moments and hot Bennoda moments! Loving it so much :)

From: lpfan503

Date: 2018-02-09

Chapter: 10

Omg, I LOVE that ROB is the one that sent the strippers!! Bahahahaa, that's fucking fantastic!


Also glad to see that my boys can't keep their hands off each other at work. :) Awesome chapter!!

From: webbie

Date: 2018-02-06

Chapter: 9

Just found it and read it all just now from the beginning for the first time!!! Woman, you have a gift!!! I'm seriously in awe! Lets get married and have lots of fic-babies together! I love you and this is awesome!!!!

From: lpfan503

Date: 2018-02-04

Chapter: 9

Just stopping in to mention that I am totally in support of details about what happened in dry storage between Chester, Talinda and Mike! Omg, plllllleeeeeeeeaaaaaaaasssssssseeeeeeee!!!

From: Penelope_Ink

Date: 2018-02-04

Chapter: 9

You put Scott in this! haha he was an asshole, but still. At the beginning, when he said, "I'm the one they call when it all goes wrong" it reminded me of that scene in Pulp Fiction when they have to call "the cleaner" XD I adore Mike and Chester dirty dancing and even making out in this. Been waiting for some good ol' fashioned Bennoda to show up! My favorite chapter so far :) I love how your merry band of misfits seem to always work together somehow.

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