The Great Below by malaiyas

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From: Bennoda4life*

Date: 2018-03-09

Chapter: 1

Aaaahhh my heart oh god </3 this was hard to read. Loved it! But wow 😭

From: MissDomho

Date: 2018-03-06

Chapter: 1

Oh god, this was perfect. Yes it was depressing- but you writing is so beautiful, I could not resist not to read. I really felt for Chester in this, broke my heart to see him like this. Thank you for sharing this with us <3

From: lpfan503

Date: 2018-03-05

Chapter: 1

Ugh, God, it's a metaphor for his whole life and all his struggles. This was hard for me to read, and I'm generally ok with dark themes. The whole concept of his footprints being erased by the ocean, and all of his pain and his life being erased as well... and then I guess changing his mind after it was too late? Just too sad. It is very well written, though, so well done.

From: Stefuh

Date: 2018-03-05

Chapter: 1

Oh... oh my god... that was so beautiful and so depressing, I'm really impressed by this. Seriously, it was so well-written, and now I have tears in my eyes, but I loved how you described the sea being so inviting for Chester. God.

From: Penelope_Ink

Date: 2018-03-05

Chapter: ?

You're right, depressing. But beautiful in its own way. This is really well-written. The imagery is spot on. The idea of Chester giving in to what he can't control hit hard. And at the same time, he willingly walked into that lack-of control moment. But that's desperation for you. How did Shakespeare put it? "Tempt not a desperate man." That's what this reminds me of. The idea of being cleansed and then realizing how small you are in such a vast ocean. Chilling.

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