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Reading my eyes will say it in many ways by SonataNocturne

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From: S K Y

Date: 2018-03-26

Chapter: 1

This is well written... u really got me with that... man there’s gotta be a fic around this :’D

From: Violet Raven

Date: 2018-03-26

Chapter: 1

Shit. That was like a punch in the face. O.O At first I was just confused about what is going on, why is the main character being so numb and the other so scared. And then there was... crimson on the hands. ANd I was like "Wait, what?! No, don't fall asleep! Please! Stay awake!"


And now I'm torn. Because this feels like a perfect standalone. But at the same time, it's so cruel to leave a cliffhanger like this. Not knowing if he made it or if he really... died.

I imagined Chester as a main character. I know, I know. Kinda... too straightforward. But there was a mention of some dark past, some hidden, painful memories. And as far as we know, Chester was the only one with traumatic childhood and adolescence. And also the only one who led this hedonistic lifestyle, drinking and doing hard drugs. And the other person was in my mind for some reason Phoenix. I dunno why. Maybe cause I just watched an old interview where Phi talked about Chester and it was obvious how much he adores him. Or because he always was that good guy of the band. :)

From: A.N.

Date: 2018-03-26

Chapter: 1

This is one hell of a one-shot! MissDomho an Stefuh, I envisioned Mike as well.


Grief is creepy. It does weird things to a person's mind, and it's very hard to understand if you haven't been through it, certainly not to the depth at which Mike has experienced it. Your telling of the suffocating nature of grief, how it can paralyze a person emotionally and physically, is really powerful.

From: AaronShinoda

Date: 2018-03-26

Chapter: 1

I imagined it to be Mike, as my love for Mike is the only thing I know, this was super sad 😭

From: Stefuh

Date: 2018-03-25

Chapter: 1

I imagined it to be Mike too. And my heart is just... broken. Maybe the other person could be Brad? I don't know. This was so much well-written and aaaah. I'm heart broken.


It's your decision to leave it at that or not. It's really amazing as a one shot or could be a good starter to a story!

From: MissDomho

Date: 2018-03-25

Chapter: 1

Oh! My! GODDD!


I absolutely am in love, in love! With the way you have written this! I seriously felt like I was a fly on the wall watching Mike[yes my first initial thought was Mike when I began to read this, as the poor man has suffered enough with the loss of Chester] fall apart. I invisoned him doing this while thinking about Chester which reduced him to drink till he was blind. God it was so sad, broke my heart, almost cried. Well done <3

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