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Sometimes - Just For A Moment by Indee

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From: hattu

Date: 2018-04-02

Chapter: 1

That was awesome! Really sad, it killed me as Mike states that Chester is lateā€¦

Can imagine that there were or maybe still are moments like this.


Very well written! Thanks for sharing!

Hattu

From: lpfan503

Date: 2018-03-31

Chapter: 1

Somehow, I can write this stuff, but it's so hard to read it. I know for me, getting it out of my head helps me personally, whether anyone reads it or not. So if this helped you, to get it out on paper, I'm glad. It's hard to read, but not in a negative way, just that it really pulls at my heart. Losing someone you love is disorienting, and you've done a good job of getting that feeling across. Even though I knew what was coming, it was still so sad for Brad to have to be the one to remind Mike that Chester wasn't coming to the meeting. :( It made my eyes water, for sure. Thanks for sharing.

From: Penelope_Ink

Date: 2018-03-31

Chapter: 1

Oh my goodness. This was sad..and cut right to my heart. I saw/heard it too, in Mike's interview..with him stumbling to keep Chester in past tense :( I just wanted to hug him. I still do it, too. I still think of him as being here, and then I remember that he's not and something sad settles over the moment.


I love the way you wrote this. I love how Mike knows something isn't right, but isn't sure what. Even as his bandmates show up, he's still waiting for Chester, who will never come :( don't worry about your English, I think you did a fine job. Thank you for sharing this. I think you did a really good job capturing Mike's emotions and how unsettled he is. How lost a bit of his world is now.

From: A.N.

Date: 2018-03-30

Chapter: ?

Holy shit... I love how beautifully dark and eerie this story is! It wasn't until near the end, that I started to realize what was confusing Mike. I love the way your writing flowed, and how easy of a read this was, even though I'm also heartbroken.


This is the first story of yours that I've read, and thank you for sharing this. It's great to have thoughtful writers like you part of this community :D

From: Samweis

Date: 2018-03-30

Chapter: ?

That was heavy... I was kind of expecting something like this, but when Mike actually said that Chester is to late, it broke my heart. First I had the feeling that Mike was going through some kind of depersonalization and maybe it was also a bit of that. When you detach from a situation.... well written and really intense, great job :)

From: SonataNocturne

Date: 2018-03-30

Chapter: ?

Oh no :( My poor heart. But I loved it anyway. And your english is fine for another non-native. Thank you for the wonderful story! <3

From: keijei

Date: 2018-03-30

Chapter: ?

This is such a stab in the heart. But I think most of us feel like Mike, wake up and do normal things until the realization hits us.

Thanks for wrote this.

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