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Crawling In My Skin by SonataNocturne

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From: A.N.

Date: 2018-04-18

Chapter: 1

As usual, I imagined Bournoda, basically Mike getting fucked really, really hard by Rob. Because of reasons. Bournoda seems to be what my brain's default pairing, lol.


Anyway, holy crap, that was intensely hot. At first I was thinking the lead character was being raped, but halfway through it just sounded like rough sex to me, and the "I love you" at the end sealed the deal. I think it's interesting, to describe sex and an orgasm as a person being torn apart, especially emotionally. Men have this interesting emotional link with orgasming, I have no idea way because I'm not a man, but, that's the way they are. It's why they act like they're about to have a heart attack (some even will say they think they're about to die), and others even cry.


Not sure if this was the effect you were going for, but that's what this made me think of. So to me, no, this isn't a weird one-shot at all. It illustrates real life pretty damn well :)

From: hattu

Date: 2018-04-17

Chapter: 1

Woah! Okay i couldn’t write an review right away, that was so fucking intense!

I read a lot, but it still amazes me how words can make feel when used in the right composition!

That here is just brilliant, have no words here!


Thanks for writing and sharing!!

Hattu

From: MissDomho

Date: 2018-04-16

Chapter: 1

God this was so intense! I can barely breathe reading this aha, that's when you know a story that good can do that :) I don't know who to decide, it could be anyone? Thank you for sharing xxx

From: Stefuh

Date: 2018-04-16

Chapter: ?

Holy hell that was kinda shocking and intense but very well written. I imagined Mike but I'm not sure for the other one... Maybe Brad...?

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