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Pretty Awesome by malaiyas

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From: Violet Raven

Date: 2018-04-26

Chapter: 1

You know what else is pretty awesome? This story! :D I remember this review from years ago. It was cringing so hard when Mike spoke cause he was so tense. Call it second-hand embarassment. :D

How you described it in your story - I sooo can see that happening. It was obvious that Mike knew what Bennoda was and he just felt awkward talking about it, and of course Chester had to tease him about ít.

Is it too weird to say that I can also see happening the second half of your story? :D Their nervousness, their unexpected desire that suddenly surfaced - it was all written so good! And the ending... oh God. :3

From: JessLP

Date: 2018-04-20

Chapter: 1

Amazing work! I love this interview! What a brave girl lol

From: Esmeralda

Date: 2018-04-19

Chapter: 1

Thank you for reposting! I was freaking out when I couldn't find this fic anymore. This just made my day. When I heard this interview for the first time, I remember thinking about the way Mike was changing the subject and also how cool was Chester about the whole thing. It was just hilarious but at the same time it made me think if they had actually read any fanfics.. I cannot wrap my head about the idea of Mike reading fanfiction, Chester maybe, but Mike no way, I may be wrong. Lol.


Anyway, your fic was amazing, beautifully written, specially the aftermath, the whole car ride, the slash and their conversation afterwards. Mike's response at the end was just awesome. Thanks.

From: lpfan503

Date: 2018-04-19

Chapter: 1

Ah, yes, that's a classic interview! LOVE THIS and I truly wonder what the aftermath of that was. It slays me to think they could have looked stuff like this up on their own! Ahahaa!


This is a BEAUTIFULLY written paragraph: "Caution filled the air between their respective positions, a shaky lack of confidence consuming both men. In the distance, a clock ticked twenty-one times before either of them moved; Mike’s heart beat thirty-four times in that same timeframe. Chester took seven steps toward him to close the distance and placed each of his knees on either side of Mike’s hips. Chester took Mike’s face in his hands, eyes still locked, chests rising and falling quickly, irises searing into one another. The sound of the clock ticking was drowned out by the sound of their breathing, by the presence of desire long repressed." Something about all those numbers just does it for me. I can't describe exactly why, but I just love those tiny details. Thanks for writing this, I love it!!

From: SonataNocturne

Date: 2018-04-19

Chapter: 1

"There will be future opportunities".... That cracked me up xD xD AAAWSIES! They are so freaking cute. That was just what I needed for today. Thank you <3

From: Taytay

Date: 2018-04-19

Chapter: ?

I love that interview so so much! Ahhh! Thank you for posting :)

From: Penelope_Ink

Date: 2018-04-19

Chapter: ?

I loved this!!! It was SO cute and so "of course" what would happen after the Love Line interview lol. You did this so well. I could see every minute. I love their intimate - although tense - ride home. I love how Chester invited Mike in. I don't know, that whole section was really great. Mike being able to read Chester's mood just by the way he's walking was fantastic. And then of course, the blow job. Loved it. I think it was just the right amount of detail :) Thank you for sharing this!! I really enjoyed it. Oh! And the best part was how Mike answered at the end with the same answer Chester gave during the interview. That was perfect.

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