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Being Human by tfybike

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From: lpfan503

Date: 2018-05-10

Chapter: 1

Brad and Mike aren't my favorite pairing, but I really liked this! Anytime a story starts with "God, I want to fuck" it's likely to be good, haha! There's always a sense of danger/thrill to be in your parent's house messing around, too, even when you're an adult. Will this be a chapter fic?

From: Penelope_Ink

Date: 2018-05-10

Chapter: 1

Loved all your descriptions in this. I think you did a great job with it. Captured every little bit of everything. In the parents' house...tsk tsk Mike XD Can't blame Brad, since it's not his house lol. And now they've got five minutes. I think they'll make it. This was an awesome little bit of lovin' for early morning reading, thank you for sharing! I have to say I enjoyed seeing the needy side of Mike :)

From: Violet Raven

Date: 2018-05-10

Chapter: 1

Five minutes? Pfff. That's more than enough for getting themselves together. They could go for a round two.


Just joking. :D Though the idea of screwing in parent's house, when they can find you at any moment, is just eeeww, I wouldn't like that. :D It was short and hot.

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