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Ghost - Everything Will Be Fine by Indee

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From: A.N.

Date: 2018-08-10

Chapter: 1

Wow, sure this was sad and heartbreaking but it was an excellent read! Thank you fr posting such a gripping story :)

From: ValentineShinoda

Date: 2018-08-10

Chapter: 1

You never have to apologize for anything, Being creative is always good no matter what they day.

From: Samweis

Date: 2018-08-10

Chapter: 1

Never apologise for anything that you write! If things want to come out, they need to get out and it doesn't matter if it is a "bad timing" or "too late" or you think it is "too sad". Writing is art and art doesn't have a time-frame or should be judged by anyone. And I hope you know that we are not judging here ;)

So, now to the story. Yes, it was sad. But I see where this comes from... It is so hard to deal with emotions and when you don't sleep enough and everything feels like crushing down on you, sometimes it's just too much to handle. Mike's action was really risky. And stupid. But I would lie if I would say that it didn't happen to me while dealing with depression. And he seems to be in a depressive state. Good, that Chester was able to safe him. I don't even want to know if it was an actual ghost, a spirit, just Mike's brain... The only thing that matters is, that he is safe and alive - and that he realised that he wants to live <3

From: bag_full_of_stars

Date: 2018-08-10

Chapter: 1

It's a good story :) sometimes this is all we need to move on...a low moment... Great job :)

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