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Across The Line by SonataNocturne

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From: JellyfishLP

Date: 2018-10-17

Chapter: 2

Ahhhh, this was so hot again ;)


I was so happy when I saw you updated this. Bondage is just so sexy, especially when it's in a bennoda story, and when Mike is the sub.


I love this collection of oneshots, keep going!

From: AmplifiedSpeculation

Date: 2018-10-17

Chapter: 2

(clears throat) FINALLY! AN UPDATE! Sorry, this review might be long...


Instead of studying in school on the symptoms and treatments of scleroderma, I'm reading this. Call me weird, but I found this very oddly sweet, especially when Mike told Chester how he loves him in the end and when Chester told Mike how beautiful he looks. I'm so weak to Mike as a bottom 0-0. This story really strongly reminds me of "Handkerchiefs" by lpfan503, and a dom/sub (very hardcore.) I wrote a while back and wanted to post before my father deleted it.


Thanks for writing! Totally bolstered my mood after I failed my quiz on CJD. (sits on bed and waits even longer).

From: AmplifiedSpeculation

Date: 2018-10-05

Chapter: 1

This. Is. Awesome! Knife-play, jesus! XD I honestly have a big fear of knives, but I really find it oddly hot when someone does knife-play to another person. Especially Chester doing it to Mike. Thanks!

From: JellyfishLP

Date: 2018-10-04

Chapter: 1

So. Fucking. Hot.


And I really liked that Chester was in control, and that Mike was the one who had to hold still the entire time :)

From: BlackRivver

Date: 2018-10-03

Chapter: 1

Woooow. o.o First time reading about knifeplay and lemme tell ya...Me likey! You did an amazing job here. It was so hawt! Mike was a total champ keeping still during Chester's ministrations, but that showed how much he trusts him. So you managed to add in a pinch of sweetness even if it's a kink/pwp smutty oneshot so kudos for that. Loved it!

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