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Across The Line by SonataNocturne

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From: AmplifiedSpeculation

Date: 2018-11-07

Chapter: 3

Sorry for the late review! Been out sick from influenza this week, still a bit dizzy...


When I found out this would be a hate fuck oneshot, I was squirming a bit in my seat. I am quite fond of hate sex, so I was totally ready to read. I have to say, good job on this one, this one might actually be my favorite one yet, who knows? The power play that was going on was a good way to keep both of them on their toes. Especially with Mike trying to deny and deny at first. And with Chester being so demanding! Yeee, I love it when somebody writes Chester in that way.


Overall, great job! And you what I’ll be doing now. I’m just going to sit in my bed and be trying to shake off this flu. Thank you! :)

From: Samweis

Date: 2018-11-05

Chapter: 3

Narghwwnargh..... (This is the inside of my brain right now).

What am I supposed to do: Working. What I actually do: Picturing angry Mike and Chester going one each other. I won't get this out of my brain for a while I guess...


In between I was a bit worried that Ches was really crossing a boundary and would seriously hurt Mike but in the end it seemed that they both enjoyed it (a lot!). And so did I ;)

From: JellyfishLP

Date: 2018-11-05

Chapter: 3

My favourite oneshot collection has an update, yay :)


Great chapter as always, and why does it get hotter with every chapter?


Well done, please update soon :)

From: Samweis

Date: 2018-10-18

Chapter: 2

I was so sure that I left a review for chapter one but when I checked on it now - nothing! Either my brain was just so on overdrive after the insanely hot scene or my memory is worse than I thought... Either way, it gave me a reason to re-read chapter one and appreciate what you did there again (not that I need a reason for reading nice stories again but it makes me feel better when I have one :p). Fuck, that was so hot! Mike as submissive part is in itself already insanely hot, but including the knife and the fact that he tries to stay still only through his own will-power... That's just unbelievable hot! And shows the trust between them. Because he could just move away. Nothing holds him back. And still, he stays there... Wow...


Chapter two was not less great. There is this one sentence:


"Mike tried to form a coherent thought so he could respond, (...)"


That sums me up pretty well. How am I supposed to form a straight sentence after this chapter?! Mike restrained and giving up control... My definition of a perfect situation :D Can't wait to read more!

From: JellyfishLP

Date: 2018-10-17

Chapter: 2

Ahhhh, this was so hot again ;)


I was so happy when I saw you updated this. Bondage is just so sexy, especially when it's in a bennoda story, and when Mike is the sub.


I love this collection of oneshots, keep going!

From: AmplifiedSpeculation

Date: 2018-10-17

Chapter: 2

(clears throat) FINALLY! AN UPDATE! Sorry, this review might be long...


Instead of studying in school on the symptoms and treatments of scleroderma, I'm reading this. Call me weird, but I found this very oddly sweet, especially when Mike told Chester how he loves him in the end and when Chester told Mike how beautiful he looks. I'm so weak to Mike as a bottom 0-0. This story really strongly reminds me of "Handkerchiefs" by lpfan503, and a dom/sub (very hardcore.) I wrote a while back and wanted to post before my father deleted it.


Thanks for writing! Totally bolstered my mood after I failed my quiz on CJD. (sits on bed and waits even longer).

From: AmplifiedSpeculation

Date: 2018-10-05

Chapter: 1

This. Is. Awesome! Knife-play, jesus! XD I honestly have a big fear of knives, but I really find it oddly hot when someone does knife-play to another person. Especially Chester doing it to Mike. Thanks!

From: JellyfishLP

Date: 2018-10-04

Chapter: 1

So. Fucking. Hot.


And I really liked that Chester was in control, and that Mike was the one who had to hold still the entire time :)

From: BlackRivver

Date: 2018-10-03

Chapter: 1

Woooow. o.o First time reading about knifeplay and lemme tell ya...Me likey! You did an amazing job here. It was so hawt! Mike was a total champ keeping still during Chester's ministrations, but that showed how much he trusts him. So you managed to add in a pinch of sweetness even if it's a kink/pwp smutty oneshot so kudos for that. Loved it!

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