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Let it all disappear by Samweis

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From: Indee

Date: 2018-10-10

Chapter: 1

If I have to put it in order, then:

• it's adorable to see Mike with his babies

• ohhhh..... Mike and Elisa didn't get along well?? the first time I see something like this and obviously interested to know more

• what is happening to Brad, really???

From: Penelope_Ink

Date: 2018-10-09

Chapter: 1

Dude, I'm loving this so far! It hooked me from the beginning. Please write some more :) I adore the ill content and strife between Mike and Elisa. I think it's great...and what's wrong with Brad? Oi, hope it's nothing really serious. It's a great start, and I'm excited to see more. I thought you did great with Mike and the twins, such a sweet moment of daddy to the rescue :)

From: ninja

Date: 2018-10-09

Chapter: 1

I see Brad, I read!


I'm glad you upploaded it because this is interresting. I love the tension between Mike and Elisa, this is going to be so much fun!


Can't wait for more!!!!!

From: BlackRivver

Date: 2018-10-08

Chapter: 1

Do I smell a cupcake (Brad xD) angst story? Then count me in. Damn, I like the tension between Mike and Elisa, makes me wonder if there's something more going on there. And damn is she annooooying. Mike you totally should've checked on Brad earlier, though, so I'm with her on that. But she leaving Brad alone in such a state? Yup. Not good. She don't deserve him. xD Interesting start! Can't wait to see where it goes.

From: JellyfishLP

Date: 2018-10-08

Chapter: 1

Interesting story, I'm excited to see where it goes :)

From: SonataNocturne

Date: 2018-10-08

Chapter: 1

O.O Me likey! Elisa is annoying, lolol! But yeah, kinda also right. Mike should have checked on Brad if he didn't answer his texts or calls. And the kids! For some reason I have recently liked when kids are added to stories and I have no idea why. But yes, Brad angst so I am totally in and can't wait to see where we are headed with this!

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