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Imposter by malaiyas

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From: mermaid_life87

Date: 2018-11-19

Chapter: 1

Beautiful! <3 Ive read this twice so far and probably will again. I think you captured every emotion perfectly. The ending was lovely *sighs*

I think it's great as a standalone but, if you decide to make it a chapter story, I will keep up with it for sure. I can already tell it would be one of my favorites :)

From: JellyfishLP

Date: 2018-11-19

Chapter: 1

Oh God, this story is so heartbreaking, it made me cry. It could also be good with more chapters, but a oneshot was beautiful, as well.


Well done :)

From: lpfan503

Date: 2018-11-18

Chapter: 1

You know, I think you should leave it as a stand alone. Otherwise, you're in for a LONG HAUL to do a subject like this justice. The temporary/permanent amnesia subject is interesting, and I think you did a good job explaining both Mike and Chester's POV on things. It would be so awful to be either person in a situation like this, I'm not sure who I feel more sorry for. It would be frustrating and heartbreaking to be either of them. Anyway, I liked the last three lines a lot. It's really sweet. :)

From: Samweis

Date: 2018-11-18

Chapter: 1

That must be so hard on Mike... The person you love isn't recognising him?! Heartbreaking! But also hard on Ches because he is really confused and scared. I mean... you think you know someone and then... I was so happy when Ches decided to let Mike come closer and prove that its really him. So I guess deep down he sensed that it is actually the person he loves!


I would love to read more but I also think that it works really well as a One-chapter-thing.

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