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From: becisamonsta

Date: 2019-01-14

Chapter: 1

HOT HOT HOT DROOL, MELTING, yummm!


This was an absolute diamond and I just adored it! So smutty and so good, thank you Rivvvverr :)

From: hattu

Date: 2019-01-05

Chapter: 1

That was hot!

Eventhough, I had to do a picture search...I am feeling old XD

I really had to google to see the other couple...


Loved this from start to end!! Just the thought of them going at in one room, just because there isn’t any space left. Sooo nice how that worked out!


Wouldn’t mind to read more!


Thanks

Hattu

From: Samweis

Date: 2018-12-30

Chapter: 1

Soooo hot! Loved it! I mean... the two couples re just perfect and together they are even more perfect <3

From: A.N.

Date: 2018-12-25

Chapter: 1

BEST FOURSOME EVER! SO HOT!!!


I love this line so much ----> “Fuck away. We don’t mind,” Tyler said, followed by Josh’s laugh.


I haven't read a really good Brad/Rob pairing in a while. They are very cute together :D


And Rob seems to me like the kind of guy who'd be down for a foursome like that. I love how creative this oneshot is, and how unique the pairings are. Thank you for writing this!

From: SonataNocturne

Date: 2018-12-25

Chapter: 1

I have read that now four times. And my brains are still melting. So excuse me while I just continue being stunned xDD Okay. First of all, I was blown away totally by this surprise. Then I remembered what you asked in chat and was O.O Jeez! Like I already yelled at you, are you trying to kill me?!! Throw in all my favs and it was so ducking hot! And also funny xD >> “What? I can’t help it. They’re getting naked,” he said with a chuckle.<< That made me laugh so hard. And at the end >> “The bloody fuck is this?!” << That _so_ Sam xDDD God dammit my brains. And now I can't stop thinking about Adam ducking Josh or Rob Sam and O.O Or.... stuff. Damn. Heck of a present squeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee! <3 <3 Thank you so much again. No words really to tell how happy I am. Brilliant.

From: Penelope_Ink

Date: 2018-12-25

Chapter: 1

I didn't realize this was a crossover until I opened it. But I like TOP, so it was fun to read. I've actually NEVER read TOP fanfiction before, so this was my first! The idea of the two couples making out on the bed together (and eventually having sex) is hilarious in my mind as I try to picture them trying to ignore each other at first lol That would be SO hard. And Rob's comment of "keep your eyes on our side of the bed" just cracked me up. Yeah. Like that's going to happen.


I did love that Tyler decided to incorporate everyone together, and the ending position was a good one. I'm glad they all enjoyed themselves, and everyone seemed okay with it, which is always good. Rob even stating he'd gladly do it again was a great ending sentiment to this.

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