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Caught Up in Between by becisamonsta

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From: derekbrad

Date: 2019-03-20

Chapter: 1

Wow I would love a birthday present like that! Your slash scenes are just wow out of this world hot! The three way kiss and how Brad and Chester basically spit roasted Mike! Yum! I wish there was more would love to see a relationship between them three...could that be something to think about?

From: Penelope_Ink

Date: 2019-03-20

Chapter: 1

I liked the beginning of this best. idk, I could see it happening. Mr. Shinoda, all "I have work to do" up in his hotel room and not wanting to go out with the guys. And even being a sour puss about it not REALLY being his birthday yet. Such a stickler. But Brad gets props for not giving him and actually getting Mike to go out. haha if Mike only knew what was coming XD talk about a birthday surprise! I also had to laugh when Mike so innocently asked Brad how he and Chester managed to become an item. It just hit me as an "awww" moment. I think it would be very hard to have a crush on someone, and then see your friend date that person instead. Especially if you hadn't made the move yourself thinking it wouldn't be possible or that they'd say no because of the situation and then to see your buddy do it successfully, it would just cut to the heart. So having said that, I think that makes Brad's "birthday present" to Mike in this a little extra special.


Thank you for sharing :D I love a good one shot.

From: Esmeralda

Date: 2019-03-19

Chapter: 1

This was exceptionally hot and fun to read. You definitely should write more often. Why is this a one shot though? You should keep going with this... maybe Mike deserve more than one night with Chester and can pursue something more.. sorry this is so good that my mind is ahead of me.. but think about it please

From: JellyfishLP

Date: 2019-03-19

Chapter: ?

OMG, Bec...this was SO HOT! I wish I could have such a birthday present, too xD


I really liked this oneshot, and I'm looking forward to equally sexy stories! Btw, your writing is getting better and better, well done :)

From: JessLP

Date: 2019-03-18

Chapter: ?

O m g t h i s w a s s o h o t,

Brad was written so well and sexy in this, I love the idea and concept, very different. And that sex scene, o o o s h h, so good <3 and please never doubt your work, I think a lot of writers tend to do that which causes writers block :(

From: Effervescent

Date: 2019-03-18

Chapter: ?

don't. doubt. yourself. i know it may be hard at times, i'm struggling not to feel insecure about my writing myself, but try, okay? cause all your works are amazing. it's a FACT. this one was w o n d e r f u l, damn.

From: L.Phoenix

Date: 2019-03-17

Chapter: ?

Imma be real with you— I LOVE threesomes but am always a bit biased because I’m selfish when it comes to Bennoda and I just like it to be the two of them but haaaaaawwwwwwt damn! You NAILED this! The descriptions, Mike’s hesitation and infatuation for chester and Brad just being the coolest friend and boyfriend ever! Ugh!!! So so so good! And Brad filming the scene 😂 who can blame him? And the cuddle scene at the end!!!! So beautifully written! Bravo, my friend!

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