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Peace and Clarity by hearts.on.fire

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From: becisamonsta

Date: 2019-03-23

Chapter: 1

Thank you so much for posting this, and sharing your wonderful words. My god woman, this was great to read! My Bennoda heart is screaming for this story ❤️

From: JellyfishLP

Date: 2019-03-22

Chapter: 1

Such a wonderful story, everything about this is cute and perfect. I think it's okay that you didn't show the actual proposal, because this way more was left to the reader's imagination. Of course it would have been cute to see the proposal, but I liked your way of writing it, too.


I loved it, thanks for sharing :)

From: Penelope_Ink

Date: 2019-03-21

Chapter: 1

This was cute :) I think my favorite part was at the beginning when Chester protested Mike's plans because he was going to go to the gym....and then followed that up with saying how getting out of bed and having guests over sounded like work lol like, then what's going to the gym??


This was a nice piece of Bennoda fluff. It was good to see all the kids there, and the lighthearted comments. And of course the ending was so very sweet.


Thank you for sharing :)

From: Effervescent

Date: 2019-03-21

Chapter: 1

wow, you left me speechless. this was that i needed. my heart is full of warmth and rainbows and you made that happen. thank you. ♥

From: L.Phoenix

Date: 2019-03-20

Chapter: ?

Omg I don’t know what I’m supposed to feel right now. There’s so much tension in my full heart. You seriously outdid yourself with this (seriously, please co-author with me someday Lolol!). Mike waking Chester up was just so sweet and the love between them was so beautiful! And the hot moment between them in the hall and their relationship with their kids and exes. This is how I would like to imagine Chester’s birthday: filled with love and good food and children and, of course, Mike. You managed to create such a glorious relationship between these two in such a small bracket of word count and I’m on the verge of tears. The set up for the proposal was so beautiful but you cut it off! I wanted to hear mike’s proposal *sobs!!!!* a part 2 maybe? But seriously, thank you for writing this. It’s been such an emotional day and this really just... I don’t know, brought peace and clarity (see what I did there? Lol!) I love your stories and writing and I adore you as a person S well! Thank you for writing this and, more importantly, thank you for sharing it. ❤️ Happy birthday, Chester! We love and miss you!

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