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From: Esmeralda

Date: 2019-05-20

Chapter: 2

Okay.. this second chapter was actually pretty good.. you guys are good at describing Chester's nervous breakdown in anticipation to the meeting.. I understand him perfectly because I also suffer from horrible anxiety and I'm guilty of biting my nails anytime I feel desperate. Damn!! what a horrible feeling.


I like the fact that you decided to portray that part of LP history, when the guys from the record label approached Chester in their attempt to get rid of Mike.. that is one of those things I always wanted to read.. and you wrote it perfectly.. that's the way I imagined it. “If you can accept these terms, we will be more than happy to work with your company, gentlemen. If not, then you can go fuck yourself!” oh Lord! That's so Chester and I love it so very much!!


I also appreciate the fact that in this second chapter Mike is not such a complete asshole towrads Chester, specially after knowing what Chester did for him.. I like that they are irremediably attracted to each other and that showed so well on that final scene when they finally kissed. It was hot and tender at the same time.

You are doing a great job with this fic by making it so freaking believable... please guys update soon, keep up the good work!

From: Esmeralda

Date: 2019-05-05

Chapter: 1

This is really different from everything else in here. I was just thinking the other day that I've never read a fic where Mike was bad to Chester. I think it was about time. I don't know if this was the case between Mike and Chester, but usually when a band has 2 frontmen there is usually rivalry over the spotlight and that is understandable. I agree it is a touchy subject but we all know this is a work of fiction. Let's give it a chance. So far is promising

From: bag_full_of_stars

Date: 2019-05-05

Chapter: 1

When at the summary says "in character" what do you mean?

From: lpfan503

Date: 2019-05-02

Chapter: ?

Nice to see another collab! The subject matter is too touchy for me. I prefer not to think of or buy into anything that paints Mike and Talinda in a bad light when it comes to Chester. I completely believe that he loved them and in turn they loved and treated him well. So... I wish you luck with this one! I can’t read it, it just makes my heart ache too much.

From: JellyfishLP

Date: 2019-05-02

Chapter: ?

This is really interesting so far, I'll be waiting for the next chapter! The art is great, too, by the way :)


Tiny criticism (not even criticism, just the grammar nazi speaking): Whenever 'that' or 'what' is used as a conjunction, there is no comma in front of it, contrary to german :)


Other than that, the story is well-written and intriguing, so please update soon!

From: halvlang

Date: 2019-05-02

Chapter: ?

I need to agree with the review below; really hard to read.

It is well written; the only critique I have is the change of the chronology from Mike/Ches to Ches/Talinda and then basically back to earlier - I think it could have been nicer to, after Mike/Chester continue the phone call and then jump to Talinda/Chester. But hey, that's just me!


I like the way you describe the situations and the tension between the characters. But again, it hits close to a sensitive topic and that can be hard to get through. Anyway, I will give it another chance and see how the next chapters develop ;)

From: bag_full_of_stars

Date: 2019-05-02

Chapter: ?

Well written and at the same time so hard to read..

This chapter looks like it's based in all those rumours that are around since Chester passed, that's what makes it hard.

Again , it's very well written ❤️❤️❤️❤️

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