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Just Breathe by LannaLlamas

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From: ninja

Date: 2019-05-21

Chapter: 1

this was heartbreaking. It took me two times to finish it. But I loved it <3

From: halvlang

Date: 2019-05-19

Chapter: 1

I could have lived with a sad ending - and that coming from me means a whole lot!


I'm a sucker for happy endings and obviously you made me smile sooo much when I finally realised that Brad is ok.


But yeah, the story was really well written and even though it is "just" a stand alone, the characters have quite some depth.

Following them through those few episodes of their life was compelling and hard to read because of the topic (and Brad's really cruel sense of just facing dead the way he did).


So, again, I would have forgiven you for a sad ending ;) (Which doesn't mean that I'm not really happy you chose another way to end this! <3)

From: JellyfishLP

Date: 2019-05-19

Chapter: 1

This was indeed heartbreaking and beautiful! I didn't expect Brad to survive, and when it turned out that he did, I was so happy :) Well done!

From: Penelope_Ink

Date: 2019-05-15

Chapter: 1

First. I LOVE Pearl Jam and Foo Fighters, so yay! Second, this was beautiful. I love the way you wrote, the progression through Brad's sickness. It was hard to see him getting weaker, and Chester was right there with him. You can feel their closeness through each section, the conversation about chicken nuggets, Chester not wanting Brad to hear his diagnosis from the doctor, the repeated banter, and how desperately Chester wants Brad to have hope rather than residing himself to death. And, like everyone else, I thought for sure he wasn't going to make it. It was a nice smile at the end to see that he did. Thank you so much for sharing this. It hit a nice spot today.

From: lpfan503

Date: 2019-05-15

Chapter: 1

Not a huge Braz fan, but I gave it a shot. It's hard to read (not b/c it's Braz but because of the subject,) but you treated the subject matter very delicately, and the ending is very sweet. :) You took a heavy piece and ended it in a way that made me smile. Thanks for sharing!

From: mermaid_life87

Date: 2019-05-15

Chapter: 1

This is beautiful. Heart breaking but beautiful. I'm a complete sucker for happy endings so I really appreciate how you ended this. <3 I was shocked but in a good way. I actually read the ending twice to make sure I read it right lol Thanks for sharing!

From: AmplifiedSpeculation

Date: 2019-05-15

Chapter: 1

My fucking Braz feels.


Oh dear god, this is heartbreaking. I had a friend that had died from lung cancer, so this kind of opened up some wounds. Not that it's your fault, I loved this story. When Chester sang to Brad, I could feel my heart just stabbing my chest, oh. Damn. I was surprised as hell that Brad actually got cured, I was kind of expecting him to die...thank god my pessimistic heart didn't get it's way. Especially the way you portray Chester's grief, I love it, and using a chronic illness always sets for a heartrending story. I almost felt tears when Brad told Chester goodbye, it reminded me of my goodbye with my friend, the difference that she was unconscious.


Thank you for this. <3

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