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Independence Day by Black_Rose & Devils_little_sister

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From: Penelope_Ink

Date: 2019-05-22

Chapter: 1

Interesting first chapter. I have to say, I'm confused by Mike. He seems so harsh to Anna in his thoughts and even in his words later to Chester...so I have to guess they're having problems, and she's pregnant on top of that. So I'm curious to find out more about what's going on there.


Way to go, Stoned Mike, taking other people's stuff. Shame on him. I'm glad it was Chester who found him though. His outburst over Mike's kiss has me worried though. He seemed seriously pissed, so again - need to know more!


lol I hope the show goes well, despite Stoned Mike and an upset Chester. I LOVE his cover of Rolling in the Deep btw....but who doesn't? It's an LP treasure, for sure.

From: halvlang

Date: 2019-05-19

Chapter: 1

That was somewhere between devastating and funny. Because I don't like that Mike felt the way he did and at the same time it was just hilarious that he got high, accidentally :D


Let's see where this goes, you are off to a nice start here :)

From: JellyfishLP

Date: 2019-05-19

Chapter: 1

Hm, very interesting :) Mike being high by accident was funny, and I'm intrigued to know if he has regrets regarding Anna.


Please update soon :)

From: mermaid_life87

Date: 2019-05-15

Chapter: 1

Interesting start. Curious to learn more about Mike and Anna's marriage. If she's just extra emotional because of being pregnant or if they have some serious marital issues going on right now. Mike seems pretty resentful so I'm thinking it's the latter?


Also really curious to know what happened the last time Mike and Ches kissed. It sounds like it didn't end well so I'm hoping we don't have to wait too long to find out.


Accidentally stoned Mike was cute/funny. :)


And, of course, I really wanted Chester to return Mike's kiss but, like I mentioned above, if it went badly last time, I understand why he didn't.


Looking forward to the next chapter! :)

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