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And All That Could've Been by TrashFoot

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From: becisamonsta

Date: 2019-05-25

Chapter: 1

Absolutely adored it. For your first fic you had done so well. Broke my heart in places, but I’m feeling highly emotional so it could be because of that 😫 thanks for sharing ❤️

From: Penelope_Ink

Date: 2019-05-22

Chapter: 1

This is short, but powerful. I wasn't expecting the ending. And there's so little information. *sigh* Very well-written. Thank you for sharing. I love little art pieces like this. The very end, with the "but I wanted to" is enough to make me want to cry. Gosh.

From: lpfan503

Date: 2019-05-18

Chapter: 1

I remember reading this on AO3 and the ending being such a shock. Poor Mike. I feel for him, trying to ease his way into Chester's life and getting to know him, and having that taken away. :( There's a lot of emotion right at the end of this one shot, nice job!

From: Esmeralda

Date: 2019-05-17

Chapter: 1

Oh man! This piece is so so sad but also amazingly beautiful... I don't even have words to explain why but it really touched me.. so sad is just a standalone and that we won't be able to see a friendship or something else blossom between those two because of the tragedy at the end. Poor boy.. I wonder what was happening to him... and poor Mike.. left behind with wondering what could have been.. the worst feeling.. maybe you could write something else based on this? Maybe a what if scenario? Sorry, it was just so beautiful.. thank you for this

From: LannaLlamas

Date: 2019-05-16

Chapter: ?

This was just beautiful. “But I was hoping to,” my heart crumbled. Thank you for this.

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