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More Than a Handshake by mermaid_life87

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From: derekbrad

Date: 2019-05-29

Chapter: 1

This was really good wow! So hot and so Bennoda, just the way I love it 💕

From: lpfan503

Date: 2019-05-26

Chapter: 1

Like - that was HOT. It was hot for Mike to just want to watch, it was hot for Chester to give in, and then it was super hot that Mike helped finish him off. Ah, I love this. Even though it ended in a way that you could keep going, I love it as a one-shot. This is going in my favorites!!

From: JellyfishLP

Date: 2019-05-25

Chapter: 1

Oh man, this was really good! When Mike said that he wasn't there to touch or be touched, and instead just wanted to watch, I thought 'wtf, Mike, why would you do that? Touching is so much better than just watching' xDDD


This was really hot, even though there wasn't much touching involved ;) The ending was great, too, and everything was so awkward and weird between them at the start, it was adorable!

From: becisamonsta

Date: 2019-05-25

Chapter: 1

This brings me the utmost joy that I am so long over due in my life. It’s awkward. It’s perfection. It’s bennoda and it’s beautiful ❤️ Absolutely flawed in your work xo

From: Esmeralda

Date: 2019-05-24

Chapter: 1

Oh Damn! This was great, can we get another shot with their next meeting so we could make sure Mike got more than a handshake? Mike is kinda weird in this and I definitely love it. Hope you write a bit more about this two❤

From: Penelope_Ink

Date: 2019-05-24

Chapter: 1

You should never worry! You did a great job with this. I tell you, it wasn't exactly what I was expecting. Hooking up via the dating app, okay...but Mike and his no touching rules lol it was like, yeah, technically NOT cheating, but come on, Mike, get real. And then he did it anyway! I love how lighthearted it all felt. It was a nice break from the usual relationship drama. I would think they'd meet again, maybe for round two? But this is a one shot, so we'll never know. *sigh* The writing in this is done very well, and it was a pleasure to read. It really was. And the ending was clever. It seriously made me laugh out loud. Oh, and I really liked the part when they first saw each other and it was like, "You're you" ...and I get that. You meet people online, and you really don't know till you meet them in person. Scary as that is.


Thanks for sharing this!

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