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Piano by LannaLlamas

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From: halvlang

Date: 2019-07-16

Chapter: 1

Oh, how much I can relate to this feeling of not being able to concentrate because the person next to me is stressing me out as hell! Very well captured and such a cute ending with Mike just kissing him because he knows.

Cute little story, thanks for sharing :)

From: Emma Shinoda

Date: 2019-07-14

Chapter: 1

Awww cute/awkward Rob is one of my weaknesses, and you captured that feeling perfectly. You're very good at being descriptive with few words. I could feel the anticipation leading up to that kiss, and see them sitting at the piano side by side. Mike's response at the end made me giggle too, that's such a Mike thing to say.


Nicely done, I hope to read more from you :)

From: Gummibear Queen

Date: 2019-07-09

Chapter: 1

Love it!


This was very cute and a nicely written standalone. There was a lot of attention to detail and feelings building up the tension for that first kiss.


Just lovely.


Nice to see people writing bournoda again

From: mermaid_life87

Date: 2019-07-08

Chapter: 1

Very cute. Not usually too big into Bournoda but I liked this. Especially the ending. The ending is perfect. <3 Your writing is good and this was a nice read. Thanks for sharing! :)

From: TrashFoot

Date: 2019-07-08

Chapter: 1

What a cute story! I can’t believe Rob was pining for so long, but it seems like such a Rob thing to do lmao I love it!

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