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I just end up getting hurt again by halvlang

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From: Penelope_Ink

Date: 2019-09-11

Chapter: 1

Unlike most of everyone else, I don't see anything wrong with Chester's reactions. He was honest with Brad, came out and said this isn't working for me, and I'd like to stop before we damage our friendship. That's a stand up thing to do. He realized Brad was falling deep and he stopped it because he knew he had to. That it wasn't going anywhere.


I don't get Brad's reaction to it, begging Chester to change his mind. I don't know. Why would you want to be with someone who doesn't want to be there with you? That's no good. Hopefully Brad will take Chester's lead and go to therapy himself. The self-harm is always so sad.


I'm not a Braz fan, but I always love your writing. Thanks for sharing :)

From: lpfan503

Date: 2019-09-08

Chapter: 1

I'm not a Braz fan, but this is written very well. It's so tragic that Chester and Brad lean on each other, and Brad wants more but Chester pulls away, only to find someone else. I think that's a stab to the heart to anyone, even if they hadn't confided so many secrets to each other. And if I were Brad, I'd be so make at Mike for taking Chester out. Obviously Mike didn't know about the two of them, so he's not really at fault, but when you're hurt you don't think clearly like that. I know he won't, and that this is a stand alone, but Brad should really tell Chester no, he doesn't want to stay close. It's just a slap in the face. Anyway... I appreciated the flow on this one. :) Nice job.

From: JellyfishLP

Date: 2019-09-07

Chapter: 1

Ohhh, this was so sad and beautiful at the same time, I really liked it. Reading Braz is always nice, even though I usually prefer Bennoda. This little story was well-written and so damn sad, well done :)

From: mermaid_life87

Date: 2019-09-06

Chapter: 1

Wow...


Alright, so, this was sad. Really sad. But, at the same time, really beautiful. <3


Poor Brad :( I was getting just as hopeful as he was until Chester broke the news that he met someone. My heart broke. I wanted a happy ending for them, but I do understand that not all stories can end that way.


There were two things that resonated with me on a level I don’t even have words for, but I’m going to try to explain anyway.


The first thing was when Chester was talking about self-harm and how he understands that it happens because emotions become “too much”. That line made me cry. Because it’s so simple but so true. And I’ve never really been able to put that into my own words so beautifully but, again, so simply. And that is exactly why self-harm happens. Everything becomes “too much”. Thank you for expressing that in a way I couldn’t. <3


The second thing was Chester saying he didn’t want to get too involved because he doesn’t even know what he will feel tomorrow. Again, you’ve put into words something I’ve struggled to express for a long time. It’s scary when everything is uncertain so I can kinda see where Chester is coming from. On my darker days, that’s exactly how it is. I have no idea how the hell I’m going to feel tomorrow so nobody should get too close. Beautiful, powerful wording.


Okay, I’ve talked enough. Just know that this struck a lot of chords with me. It’s a wonderful standalone. Thanks for sharing! <3 *hugs*

From: AmplifiedSpeculation

Date: 2019-09-06

Chapter: ?

This was goddamn beautiful. You should write more Braz ;D


It absolutely broke my heart how Chester treated Brad after he shown him all his scars.


This was definitely sad. But I'm really glad that you write this, especially showing Brad's raw emotions.


Thank you for sharing.

From: Esmeralda

Date: 2019-09-05

Chapter: ?

Oh I'm so sad this is just a standalone... this is just so beautiful, and heartbreaking... you did a great job with this one. Why Chester has to be this way? Is he not seeing that he is breaking Brad's heart with everyone of his decisions? Poor Brad! I really feel for him. Again kudos to you.. this is truly beautiful. Well done

From: hattu

Date: 2019-09-05

Chapter: ?

This was sad and heartbreaking! But beautifuly written!

I like the back and forth and how you portrayed both.

I would like to cuddle Brad to death right now! I really wished Ches would see what he is causing.


Enjoyed reading this! Hope you keep going with writing! Even when it Takes time, please just don’t give Up!


Cheers

Hattu

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