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Method To The Madness by mermaid_life87

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From: Penelope_Ink

Date: 2019-09-08

Chapter: 1

So either Brad is a damn good friend, or he really wants Chester for himself. I'm so not into Braz, so I hope it's all pretend and it will somehow get Mike to come out from his hiding place. Seems like it would be weird, wouldn't Mike question why they're kissing/ass grabbing? That would be my first thought...or maybe, oh, okay, he likes Brad. I'll leave them be, because we're all friends. Wouldn't it feel like a bad friend thing to do to try and "steal" Chester away from Brad? I don't know, I'm probably putting way too much thought into this since it's only two chapters. So let me scale this back. I hope Mike admits he likes Chester and Chester gets his ass slapped/grabbed by Mike for real :) and we can see some bennoda kisses.

From: lpfan503

Date: 2019-09-08

Chapter: 1

Ha, so Brad's idea is to pretend to make a move on Chester so Mike will be uncontrollably jealous and admit he's in love with Chester?


I'm with Chester. Delson just wants an excuse to grab his ass. ;)


I hope for Chester's sake, it works. Come on, Mike! Admit you want to grab Chester's ass too!

From: JellyfishLP

Date: 2019-09-07

Chapter: 1

This was really cool! It definitely needs more than just one more chapter, please?


Update soon, I need to read how Brad's plan turns out! Also: God dammit, Mike, if you know what Chester feels for you, and you feel the same way for him, then say something! Ugh, I'm so angry at your Mike ;) Anyway, this was great :)

From: Esmeralda

Date: 2019-09-06

Chapter: 1

This is funny and entertaining, but are you saying this will just be 2 chapters! c'mon this is great material, I cannot wait for the fun to begin with Brad and Chester plan and Mike's reactions... cannot wait!

From: halvlang

Date: 2019-09-06

Chapter: 1

You definitely made me laugh! Don’t doubt your skills ;)


I had fun reading this and I also think that the drama in here was brought into the mix really well. Makes me wanna punch Mike though, stubborn idiot! But hey, at least we get a bit of Braz now as well, so maybe I can forgive Mike in a bit. Even though I think it’s unfair to put Chester through all the self-loathing when he actually IS feeling the same. Not cool, dude!


But, after all, Brad’s plan (and also his talk to Mike before. Actually, also the talk between Ches and Brad on the bus when Brad wants to sleep and be miserable) is funny and it was some really nice, light reading that I really needed, so thanks :)

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