LPfiction

Reviews

Numb by rock-on

Add review

From: reiku

Email:

Date: 2005-06-07

Chapter: 1

pleasant story

From: reiku

Email:

Date: 2005-06-07

Chapter: 1

im with darkshine.... that was intenseit was almost like what he was saying between the flashbacks had no emotion or life to it.and now he feels likeshit and his body shut down because he was stupid thinking he had something with the other guy who was to worried about himself to know what the fuck he was doing,so mike told chester they were over,the other guy said he was fucked up and left,mike found chester dead and now lives in the room just sitting there

From:

Email:

Date: 2005-06-07

Chapter: 1


From: VampyricRaven

Date: 2004-09-13

Chapter: 1

dead-chester

evil cheater-mike

other person whos girl cheated-rob


though at times i thought one of them was joe..

From: darkshines

Date: 2004-05-06

Chapter: 1

Wow, that was intense and SO well written. Amazing. I love it.

From: guitar_chicka

Date: 2004-02-26

Chapter: 1

wowwwwww....that was.......incredible. you are an amazing writer. the only proublem was i couldnt figure out which person was which. i noe chester was the one that died but yea....great, amazing, incredible.

From: .x lithium glitter .x

Email:

Date: 2003-04-09

Chapter: 1

i loved that so much. youre a very talented writer.

From: Peorth Undead

Email: otsegoundead114@yahoo.com

Date: 2002-11-18

Chapter: 1

dude that was some pretty damn good writting nice!

From: Holly

Email:

Date: 2002-11-18

Chapter: 1

wow that was.....depressing for lack of a better word, but good nonetheless

Reviews 1 to 9 of 9