Amazing! Totally breathtaking, hot, funny, beautiful! I keep reading your fics over and over again cause they are just way too awesome. I just wish we'd have more authors like you instead of this trash. :( We need you back Ray!
From: Bennoda >_< Psycho
So Mike gave his virginity away as a birthday present....?
Haha gr8 job i loved it!! = )
I just saw my comment from almost two or so years ago! I knew I read it once, hehe. :)
What I liked about it is that I think you got all of the character's right on. Each of the guys have their own personality, and you depicted theirs well.
I love the Bennioda love! It was great. :)
God!...Cant breathe... Hot...Amazing!
That´s a Game a would love to play...
Chaz is the hottest guy on earth...
That was a really awesome story and I think a lot of people enjoyed it. I know I did.. X)
Just the right amount of humor and sex to make it perfect...wonderful job!!
lmao great ending man!
the story was really good, very well written..well geez all ur fuckin stories that i've read are like that!! great job!
That was really hot, just... really hot.
That story was hot!!!...wonderful
that story's great.
one word! WOW!!!
AWW.. I WANT A SEQUEL!! NOOO.. LET ME REPHRASE... I NEEEEEEEEEED A SEQUEL!! HAHHA I ABSOLUTELY LOOOOOOVE THISS!!!! IT IS JZ SOOO AMAZING!!!
A drunk Joe and dave nice touch I applaud!!
hey that was so hot and i know you had fn writing it. keep at it forever and give it all you got if you can write more stories like this you'll have a lot more people going to this website just for this story.
That was so awesome. Well done ;)
I loved it how the other guys herad them and were listening outside the room and giggling drunk! And that they took it well, to say the least.
the rules says u can't update more then one story i one day. but it also says u can add and update the same story in less then a day. read the rules again. and read them closely.
love ya and lp too,
From: Charley. :D
man! i was about to go to bed, and a friend linked me this. i'm SO glad i read it, and now i'm all breathy. i LOVED it. maybe because i love chocolate. maybe because i love chester. maybe because chester was covered in chocolate. whatever the reason, i LOVED it.
oh my i'm spent. you need a really big hug for that. now i want some chocolate really bad...<3
From: Vampire Princess
mmmm freaking hott*goes off into own little world*
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