salut, it's kelly here.

bitch stole mike's mic. ftw.

we know what you want to do with those fingers, mike

this will re-direct you to mon myspace: mikkennoda.co.cc

yeah so epic review: http://www.lpfiction.com/reviews.php?id=13423

From: Kelly

Date: 2008-05-12

Chapter: 6

UM YES

also would like to say you need to stop smoking while writing, it's bad for you

BUT PLEASE DO WHEN YOU FEEL THE NEED TO SKIP 4 YEARS

FOUR YEARS

FOUR

YEARS

.

chester called mike mister hahaha

PANDA ORANGE CHICKEN OLOLOL good stuff

just because this probably makes a good review: YOU MADE SOME MINIMAL ERRORS THAT DID NOT TAKE AWAY FROM THE READING SO YOU STILL ROCK

I JUST HAVE TO TELL YOU THAT BECAUSE MAYBE NEXT TIME YOU WON'T MAKE THEM EVEN THOUGH YOU WON'T NOTICE THEM lolol

why am i doing this, please don't take this to heart or anything

HEART HAHA WHY DOES IT FEEL LIKE MY HEART IS BREAKING so cuteeee

mike is the creepiest old man i have ever seen don't TOUCH him he's mine you're mean you don't do that to people i don't give a fuck if you're his so called boyfriend he's mine SEE! SENTENCES ARE WAY BETTER AND EASIER TO UNDERSTAND WITHOUT COMMAS AMIRITE

OH DON'T LET ME FORGET

BUT

I DIDN'T SEE ANY APOSTROPHES

YOU NEED APOSTROPHES BECAUSE THAT WILL MAKE YOUR STORY "BETTER"

love you hun, hope you don't mind my rant of a review about reviews

but i seriously loved this ALL 12 PAGES (12 is my fave number dontcha know)

<3