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Everything's Still Not Lost by mu5icBtcH

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From: Akira'sBliss

Date: 2004-09-14

Chapter: 12

It was decent, not too shabby. Looking forward to the next update. Nice job.

From: BreakingtheHabitLPfan

Date: 2004-09-14

Chapter: 12

It was good! BUT CHESTERS UPSET WITH MIKEY!! Make him all happy again!! As well as Mike!! and HURRY with the update!


~~* i AM Breaking The Habit *~~

From: You Not Me

Date: 2004-09-14

Chapter: 12

I just read all of this and I must tell you that it was great. I feel bad for Chester , he's been there for Mike through leaving him, the fight with Blake, both of them almost dying and now Mike can't remember him. I love how you have kept Rob part of the story ( that flash back sex was hott!!) The grave site visit was wonderfully sad.

I never would have guessed that Chester would have walked out on Mike. He's had enough now... Please update this when you get a chance. Oh yeah I did see some spelling mistakes but they aren't bad, You read my fic so you know I have no room to talk lol.

From: xBreakingTheHabitx

Date: 2004-09-14

Chapter: 11

Great story... I would love to see more.. i've read the first sequel too.. ur a great writter! ^_^ keep it up

From: karla

Email: prissy@bayou.com

Date: 2004-09-13

Chapter: 11

Can I hear a BIG FAT UH OH !!!!!!!!???????? OH NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO


EEK !!!!!!!!!!!!!


What a twist !

From: Junie

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Date: 2004-09-12

Chapter: 11

*cries* Excellent chapter!

*sits around and waits for more*

From: Krwlng4LP

Date: 2004-09-11

Chapter: 11

Ouch that last line is definately gonna kill the moment for Chester. I know if my boyfriend called me by another name while things were getting steamy I would be pissed off. I can see Chester just blowin up on Mike since he is tired of hearing about Rob all the time from Mike. I can see trouble a brewin and I know it's only gonna make the story even better. I hope to see you update soon, because I am very curious as to see what happens next between these two. So quickly update!


Kathy:)

From: kasey

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Date: 2004-09-11

Chapter: 11

*jaw drops* whoa...totaly shocking. ROB! Omg what is chester gonna say! Please update soon....i gotta see this!!! BTW i abosolutely LOVE your story!

From: Kasai

Date: 2004-09-11

Chapter: 11

Wow.. that end part was really shocking. I'm wondering what Chester is goona say.. or ..well.. think. It's really very sweet how much Mike cares for Rob, but, it's also very heartbreaking. Because, Chester must get a bit upset because Mike cares so very much for Rob. Oh, once little suggestion, watch out for some of your spelling errors, you honestly don't have a lot, but, it;s good to keep it all correct. Anyway, I'm still lving the story, you did an excellent job on this chapter, of course. So, keep up the great work and update soon!

From: lil slash monkee87

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Date: 2004-09-11

Chapter: 11

I love what you are doing with the story. I haven't read a story that you must keep reading in so long and your story is just that. Please keep updating because everything is so good. Me likey very much. Cheers :)

From: Hitler

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Date: 2004-09-11

Chapter: 11

Fuking update already!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

From: Nique

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Date: 2004-09-10

Chapter: 11

ROB???????? WTF????? Chester's gonna be mad!

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Date: 2004-09-10

Chapter: 11

*bites*



this gets better and better. and i love the fast updates. cant wait to see what happens!

From: linkinloopy

Date: 2004-09-10

Chapter: 11

OK upon reading that last sentence I gasped and was like "NO!" Gr- POor chester- he has been way patient with this whole rob thing but damn Mike gah Im so gr..jeez- wow...well you defintly got a reaction outta mE!

From: Pili

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Date: 2004-09-10

Chapter: 11

And now..well, you really know to do a great chapter..and ends in the perfect moment to keep us all impatient and nervous til next one. Brilliant *hugs*

From: Vampire Princess

Date: 2004-09-10

Chapter: 11

oooo Mike thinks Chester is Rob!!!!!!!

From: Akira'sBliss

Date: 2004-09-10

Chapter: 11

Whoa, new conflict? I sense more uh ohs. Very nice as always. *hands you a cookie of some sort*

From: HR

Date: 2004-09-10

Chapter: 10

With each chapter, you seem to be uncovering piece by piece of Mike's enclosed memory. I bow down to you for not rushing with Mike's recovery in this for although amnesia fics are few and far between, there is the temptation to rush along into it and make Mike remember too much at once. But it's been slow paced and only recently in the last few chapters have you begun to let more and more lose of what Mike remembers, focusing particularly on the events that lead up to his amnesia.


And on top of that, you've painted this helplessness of Chester's part and confusion/frustration on Mike's. After all, he's woken up with his own real memory being of Rob and suddenly there's Chester, someone who claims to have been his lover. It's good to see their relationship is developing again, although it feels like they're starting from the beginning. In particular, his suicidal tendencies are worrying as well. His only hope is that Chester can help pull him through cause it's hard for both of them.


And there also seems to be a lot more emphasis on Rob in this story as well. It's nice to see that you've added that, showing the bond he and Mike must have had. Just a suggestion, a couple of flashbacks of Rob, as well as him and Chester, may also be quite nice, just to see what kind of relationship they did have.

From: Krwlng4LP

Date: 2004-09-09

Chapter: 10

Awww I liked that chapter too. Things are starting to look better for the two of them. :D Yay! I just hope things keep going good for the both of them. They both deserve to be happy again. So I hope to see you update soon!


Kathy:)

From: Jolie

Date: 2004-09-09

Chapter: 10

Hooray for new chapters... and Aerosmith. Yay. *grins*

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