Reviews
Perfect by Darth Yak
From: Gummibear Queen
Date: 2005-08-14
Chapter: 3
I hope you realise I won't be able to eat all day!
I now remember why I hadn't reviewed that fic - you told me not to read it!!!
And I thought you loved Mike!
*pets Mike*
Bec may think you're a selfish prick but a drill!!!!!!
From: shmerf
Date: 2005-08-08
Chapter: 3
O.o....wow...that was amazing....TWISTEEDDDD!!!WOOOOOOOOOOOO!
From: Sarah Renee
Email: antilovesong@hotmail.com
Date: 2005-07-13
Chapter: 3
Mmm. Beautiful. And not hard to follow at all -- at least not in my opinion.
I like how you didn't spend much time on the unimportant things but took the time to detail (nicely detail, might I add) the good stuff (gore, hehe). And yeeeow, I love that I'm mentioned at the beginning of the third chapter. It makes me feel all warm and prickly inside when someone mentions my name and the stuff I'm known for writing. :P
I liked the story. I think the chapters were a tad short and I would have preferred some more detail (on the important/gory stuff) but that's just my opinion, of course. Nice job, my love. :) And I'm not just saying that to get into your pants!!
From: Marz&Dee
Date: 2005-07-02
Chapter: 3
argh....poor mike...the shit we put the members of lp through....*smiles* horrible...we are!
anywais...i only have one complaint....who's the guy? i pictured it as chester..prolly cuz i just read chicken so yah...=)
-MarZ
From: xAv
Email:
Date: 2005-02-26
Chapter: 3
i'm not quite sure if i should be disturbed or if i should applaude you for such writing. i think i'll applaude. *applaude, applaude* i like your writing style, even though it's somewhat gorey (which never hurt anyone, other than the characters it's inflicted against). i like the fact that it's not full of words you can't understand, but it's not really in msn talk or neanderthol-ic swearing every other line. so bravo <33333333
From: Xander
Date: 2004-12-28
Chapter: 3
nice work! I love your use of Vocabulary. The drill was an interesting touch as well
From: taurus
Date: 2004-10-12
Chapter: 3
:whistles: Wow..... I'm speechless. A drill..... :shudders:. Excellent imagination. My mind is seriously blank. I have no works to describe how I felt about this. It was so gruesome but oddly enough it didn't sicken me. Very intriguing. The story seemed to pull you into each scene. I love you for writing this!
I know this is a lame attempt at a review but like I said, I can't find the words to describe my feelings on this.
You did a wonderful job!
Taurus
From: Amber! Once again...the laziness kicks in *sighs*
Email:
Date: 2004-10-11
Chapter: 3
the drill! I think that is new! very originaland well written! AWESOME JOB CYN!
From: ShadowGraffiti
Date: 2004-10-11
Chapter: 3
*feels stomach to make sure there isn't a hole*
Wow… gah… um… wow…
Probably shouldn't have read that just after eating ^^;
I enjoyed the writing style and the flow, however. It really told you what a sick and twisted bastard this was, and I really really really had some SPMS moments… the loose blood thing was nasty.
It was so well described… wow!
*is in awe*
Congrats hun. This is more MAWish than I could ever be.
-Shadow
From: cRiSpY cReAm
Email:
Date: 2004-10-11
Chapter: 3
reading that made my ass hurt...lol god i feel bad for mike..but it was kool..adios
From: You Not Me
Date: 2004-10-11
Chapter: 3
*Twitch*
I FUCKING LOVE YOU!!
It doesn't matter that you never said who the guy was. I thought that the ending was perfect. I never could have guessed that you would have used a drill and forced it out through his stomach. Blood gushing like a volcano...
I am going to be smiling all day thinking of this during my lame ass sociology class. Please hurry and write something new.
*adds to favorites*
Dragana
From: Heartbeat
Email:
Date: 2004-10-11
Chapter: 3
Woah.....
*takes a moment to recover*
That has to be the sickest thing I ever read and the honest truth is I love you for it! *tackle hugs you* that was so wierd and strange and twisted and disgusting and wonderful and and
*faints*
From: ChemistInk
Email:
Date: 2004-10-11
Chapter: 3
I....
Fucking....
Hate you...
*dies* oh god.
From: d.d.
Date: 2004-10-11
Chapter: 2
Oh my god, Cyn. I really have no idea what's happening here, but I love it just the same. It's not hard to follow, just everything is a mystery. If I had a complaint - it's too short! I want much more of this story. I don't think your last chapter was graphic at all, in fact it's probably as tastefully written as possible, considering the subject matter. I can't wait to see what the final installment brings... What's next? Update!
From: ebony_miasma
Date: 2004-10-10
Chapter: 2
Oh my goodness, I can't wait for the next part. I wonder who the guy is. But this is great and I'll be glad to see what happens.
From: cRiSpY cReAm
Email:
Date: 2004-10-10
Chapter: 2
y is rite! sniff...i read a loooooong time ago an (dont laugh at me) inuyasha fic with him mutilating ppl...its kool well not in real life but..ya im done lol update soon i want to c wat his "new" tool is..adios
From: You Not Me
Date: 2004-10-10
Chapter: 2
I really liked it, more so then the last. I can't wait for the next chapter. I want to know who the guy is but at the same time I don't. I love stories that keep me guessing. Great Job once again.
From: Amby! (sorry too lazy to sign in =D)
Email:
Date: 2004-10-10
Chapter: 2
It's being perfectly set up to the gore. I like it! I just want to figure out who the guy is. *shifty eyes* *glomps* keep going!
From: cRiSpY cReAm
Email:
Date: 2004-10-10
Chapter: 1
o sounded interesting so wat is mr. no name gonna do to mike? update soon! so i can know adios
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From: spike bennoda-lee
Date: 2005-12-11
Chapter: 3
DARTH YAK!!!!!! hey!!! it's burning daylight from the boards!!! haha - i didn't know you had an acct. here!!! hey, your story's pretty cool (except for all the goriness)...please write more!!!