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Know Your LP Members by the fro
From: Monev
Date: 2005-01-02
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This is my constructive criticism.
Point 1 - Capitalisation is not optional in the English language. Please, capitalise.
Point 2 - This was rather hard to follow. I had to go back and check to see if I was still on track here. Maybe I'm slow, but it's juat a suggestion.
Point 3 - You missed some astericks (The ones used for action indicators) here and there. The excessive dots we're unnecessary, as were the astericks used to bleep out the swearing.
Point 4 - Britney Spears. Not Brittany Spears. Lip sync. Not lip sing.
Point 5 - The abbreviations were a bit annoying, but it wasn't too horrible. It just kinda irked me.
So, generally, this just needs to be cleaned up. Hunt down a beta on the boards, there are a lot of people willing to do it.
No, this is not a flame, just incase anyone wants to get on my ass for it. -Refer back to first sentence-
From: meteora500
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Date: 2005-01-02
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hey this is funny! did you get the idea from that show All That? cuz they do a skit like that in it. you gotta write more!!
From: izzy
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Date: 2005-01-02
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lol, hysterical!
From: Depressed
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Date: 2005-01-02
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Funny...Keep going
From: Papercut
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Date: 2005-01-02
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That was so fucken harilous!!!! Keep on writing!!!!
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Date: 2005-01-02
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Yeah, nice attempt, dear.
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Date: 2005-01-02
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No...
Just no...
From: The Obsessed Sibbie
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Date: 2005-01-02
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1. I NEVER feel like logging in! ; )
2. YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YOU GOT THIS STORY UP FINALLY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! But what happened to the... whooops... must be a different chappy... ^^;
3. UPDATE!!! *turns into zombie and marches out*
From: Crystal
Email: kitsuneofstarz203@yahoo.com
Date: 2005-01-02
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O.o Oh... my... god... Lemme guess, this was written by aliens named Nienna and Midnight and Sibbie, and they lived for Linkin Park? *random thought* are you gonna be mean to Rob? And what about the Chester fangirls??? Wouldn't they, like, throw a kumquat at you guys? hmmmm???
Either way, good story... just needs Osakan pigtails, a penguin maid and a kumquat!
OK, Well..... CONTINUE!!!! _^.^_
~
Crystal
PS- If this review "sounded" like a "flame" it wasn't! This story is kick-butt! READ IT!!!
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From: kelsey
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Date: 2005-01-02
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LMAO! that story wuz funny as hell! a little hard to follow but very funny! i look forward to chapter 2!