Holy shit! That was amazingly hot! Mike's image in my head almost pushed Rob out of there, but not quite ;) lol.

All the small things made this standalone really stand out. I loved how Mike took of his hat and put it on Rob in the end. That was so adorable. I had a perfect image of that in my head.

Great fic, you're a great author. I hope the R/M pairing's stuck on you. Maybe you'll write another ;)

Fuck me, if that's why Mike never takes his shirt off, I'll die. Tattoos and a navel piercing and a cowboy hat and chaps and a six pack? On Mike? Holy crap. So hot. Almost too hot.

OMG that I freaking LOVED !!!!!!!!!!!!!!! But really I wanna see what happens next ! A sequel maybe ???????? Please oh please ? *bats eyelashes*

fuck that was hot

::melts into a gooey love puddle::

holy hottness. that was the SEXYest thing ive have read in a long time. i cant even see straight. the imagery of mike pole dancing? omigod. *grabs ice packs* mike in chaps? mike in a cowboy hat? *faints* wow. that was amazing. =)

wow...that was hot!! *fans self* great story!! that is definitely not for the weak.

Well. You were right about it not being for the faint of heart, mine about stopped. Very hot.

perfect ending for the perfect story. In a weird way it was kinda sweet. Nicely written. It rocked my socks! \m/

-Gen

Guh...

You just know that I'm going to have to return to give you a proper review - once I'm coherent, that is.

Mike... Cowboy... Eyeliner...

Guh...

loved it!

absolutly loved it!

i can't think of anything else to say...er...have I mentioned how much i loved it?

*have lots of gummibears*

B

xx

I like it alot thanks for sharing that

Marginal at best.

I mean...

*stops taking Stupid pills*

*cleans up mess*

You know what I think.

OMFG that was HOT! If strippers here looked like Mike I might actually go more often! ;)

woah, image overfloat. That was pretty hot, girl! Damn, I have to go to a strip club. And to think that...exotic dancer...okay I have to calm down. I loved how you build up the tension from a nice erotic lap dance to that well written scenario. Sends you a few kisses! And there will be more, right? There has to be a lot more soon. Exotic dancer, I can't get over that. Brilliant!

This was awesome, I had a grin on my face the whole time. Will there be more? I would love for you to continue you, but it was awesome as a standalone.

Noooooooooo! I demand more! right now! MORE! Please. *gets on ahnds and knees* That was one of the hottest pieces I have ever read. I am pleading for you to turn this into a multi chappy fic. Too damn good to stop.

fantastic......i dont like how mike called rob kid though (kitten, on the other hand was excellent), and how come the hat didnt have mikes phone number?