That was a really good story. Different. I liked it. : )

Oh and you asked about my other story. Bored in every sence of the word. It was deleted and I have been supspended bc I posted Two stories in 24 hours. thats what i get for not reading all the rules. Anyway I will repost it when i can get back on. Thanx

U can put this one back up tomorrow, just take it down so you aren't breaking a rule, this is not a flame, I'm trying to be helpful

NO! U can't post more then one story in 24 hours! TAKE THIS ONE DOWN I DON'T WANT U TO BE BANNED FOR A WEEK LIKE I WAS!